here's some re-edits:
na_11_8V (I decided to put the bubble back in
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na_07_7mu (the koma bubble went outta the koma panel lol, so i corrected my mistake)
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rk_05_6H (I thought maybe it would look better if it almost look like the jpn koma hehe)
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rk_15_3dl (here are two versions.. btw, this is the correct translation)
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yo_08_3ul (the other one, the font look italic.. so here's my own version, the text is slightly bigger)
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na_24_5Hdl (rebuilt edition lol)
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gt_16_2H (the koma bubble went outta the koma panel lol, so i corrected my mistake)
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bl_13_6H (I decided to put the bubble back in and correct the Technique's Spelling "Sode No Shirayuki"
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bl_33_2H (Corrected the previous translation, she suppose to say "I said It's Impossible!!!")
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bl_02_3ul (I thought I give it another edit from the last making it look like the jpn version lol)
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tz_05_3dr (I felt the first one has a strong stroke of black, so i fixed it)
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tz_02_3dl (fixed The text alil, and attempted to replicate the jpn koma)
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