First poem

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Jan 10, 2011

First poem by Hachibei at 6:20 AM (510 Views / 0 Likes) 2 replies

  1. Hachibei
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    You wrote me a love letter,
    Promising that every word is true,
    But I'm confused by the signature,
    So remind me, who are you?

    Is it any good? It's the first time I've ever written a poem before, so be brutally honest, please! I'd really like to understand poetry better.

    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
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