First poem

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  1. Hachibei
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    You wrote me a love letter,
    Promising that every word is true,
    But I'm confused by the signature,
    So remind me, who are you?

    Is it any good? It's the first time I've ever written a poem before, so be brutally honest, please! I'd really like to understand poetry better.

    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
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