Feedback about my song

[carloandreacchio]

Hey,

I have just finished my first draft of my song that i need to make for a school subject (music technology, worth 50% of my mark). I put some elements in there to make it pretty videogamish.

If you can, give some feedback to me

Click here to listen

I am also in need of a name for it, so if you have any suggestions, suggest away

Carlo

 

[OrR]

Very nice! I like it!

How about a title with a general video game reference, like "Rat Cave" or "The Secret Passage".

 

[carloandreacchio]

Rat cave sounds pretty cool.... I might start a poll when more people suggest some names

 

[mthrnite]

Spooky synth-oboe for the win!
So...
I'd scale back on that drum-roll fill, use it once or twice tops 'cuz it's a little on the indistinct side.
I like the tempo-up glide, and the 4-on-the-floor + choked cymbal, right after the very fast part, that was cool.
After I heard it the fourth time, I still wasn't tired of it... a good sign.
Very good, really no complaints except for that drum roll fill, and maybe fatten up the low end, that never hurts.

Title:
Rocky & Bullwinkle vs. The Mountain King

 

[carloandreacchio]

Heh if you didnt hear the low end, means your speakers aint very good... try listening with headphones on

EDIT:

I am fixing up some problems with the strings atm... i am also experimenting with a modulation during the beginning

I'll see if i like it, then i'll up it again

Cheers for the comments so far, keep them running