it wasn't about that.TempusC said:This is what editing is, guys. Controlling for grammar, structure, and content. I didn’t mean to be mean - I was attempting to help. I will stick to not helping in the future, and my apologies if it felt like I was imposing on you or criticizing your work. I am aware it is not near completion, and that quality will improve over time.
As for the last comments, those are very nice facts - they should be in the text. Even if it’s clear what’s going on in the game, if the text doesn’t coincide with that, it’s going to seem confusing.
I will restrain my comments from now on to general encouragements, unless asked to respond to something in particular.
As far as the game's opening goes, that's literally how it's supposed to be. The reason it's not in it, is due to some space issues, you can't really go and say
"hey, instead of earth, we live on Jigu, also elements just up and turned into monsters, etc.,"
Those facts are to be known before you play the game, because the game came out after the animoo.
if you want to edit, then talk with Noitora first, if he accepts you, then you can go in and edit, on the spread sheet.
the main point of those screens, is to show that yeah, work is being done. Not, "hey this is our finished product lolz"
the reason i even re-wrote the opening, was so that it would be easier to edit, not to say "it's complete."
This is all for future reference.