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Discussion in 'General Off-Topic Chat' started by Awdofgum, Apr 19, 2008.
I've finally made a song!
Well it's not done yet but i want to know why you guys think?
Great song! I love the soft touch of the melody
it sounds ok, just didnt sound like it was going anywhere then at the end i dunno what that was about, the whole song just like changed, it didnt fit
Yeah, I know it doesn't sound like it's going anywhere, I still have to add a 50 second part in the middle.
And eventually I'll have the lyrics finished so you guys can hear my amazing voice
Man did you read a tutorial somewhere? I have FL Studio installed and attempted to use it but then gave up
I've watched and read hundreds of tutorials, and i still am. It is really hard but eventually I'll get good.
It's not bad. It just seemed to stop for no reason at the end, you should have made it softly fade or something
Love it, so now I'm gonna have to lurk your posts, in case you make anything else musical...
Not bad, sounds like something you might find in a game menu or a relaxing portion of a game. Seems like you could easily make an ending by adding a short lowish note followed by a long lower note
great song dude.
Thanks for the comments. As I said earlier, I'm not done but when i do finish, I'll let you guys know
Unless you don't want to
I kinda like it. Good job!
You should listen to my band The Neilkrophagist.
really nice mood you try to aim at with your song, but... it needs a lot of improvement : )
if you want, pm me on msn, i can help you with fl and any other program you might use : )
check out my page (link in sig), there you can see what kind of music i write and what i'm capable of : )
FL is a huge pain to learn. i have written songs too and i had to teach my self. ill up load later. nice song!
Sounds like Animal crossing - could be good or bad depending on your opinion. I kind of like it.
Don't like the random pauses (they're very very short) where it sounds like you've copied and pasted a part.
wonderful melody in the beginning, just sounds unfinished.
I don't produce this kind of music with FL studio, but you did really great! The mix of everything is OK too, everything is in balance. Maybe a bit more variation in instruments, like give the keys a solo, and later give the keys just a background loop or something, and get a guitar to do a solo.
And as arctic_flame says, the random pauses really don't fit in. Especially with this kind of music, counting the beats is something you do unaware. If a beat doesn't fit in (like 1, 2, 3, and then a 1 instead of 4) it really hampers.
I think you have the basics laid down. Don't give up, this could be a great tune.
I like the effects you do to the sound of the keyboard at around 0:55.
Yeah, the basics are definitely there.
It's relaxing, sounds nice. Kind of intrancing - until it cuts off unexpectedly.
You've definiately got something going, though. Keep us updated.
Its ok. I commend you for doing something useful with that software. It makes me feel like I'm on hold though, the song seems to be made up of 3 parts that just repeat and lap into themselves.
I still like it, but I would listen to it maybe once a week, not daily. It'd frustrate the doogens out of me.