After countless hours in FL studio.

[Awdofgum]

I've finally made a song!
Well it's not done yet but i want to know why you guys think?
Rhode

 

[raulpica]

Great song!

I love the soft touch of the melody

Good work

 

[jaxxster]

it sounds ok, just didnt sound like it was going anywhere then at the end i dunno what that was about, the whole song just like changed, it didnt fit

 

[Awdofgum]

Yeah, I know it doesn't sound like it's going anywhere, I still have to add a 50 second part in the middle.
And eventually I'll have the lyrics finished so you guys can hear my amazing voice

 

[Salamantis]

Man did you read a tutorial somewhere? I have FL Studio installed and attempted to use it but then gave up

 

[Awdofgum]

Man did you read a tutorial somewhere? I have FL Studio installed and attempted to use it but then gave up

I've watched and read hundreds of tutorials, and i still am. It is really hard but eventually I'll get good.

 

[xJonny]

It's not bad. It just seemed to stop for no reason at the end, you should have made it softly fade or something

 

[scubersteve]

Love it, so now I'm gonna have to lurk your posts, in case you make anything else musical...

 

[notnarb]

Not bad, sounds like something you might find in a game menu or a relaxing portion of a game. Seems like you could easily make an ending by adding a short lowish note followed by a long lower note

 

[Dylan]

great song dude.

 

[Awdofgum]

Thanks for the comments. As I said earlier, I'm not done but when i do finish, I'll let you guys know
Unless you don't want to

 

[NeSchn]

I kinda like it. Good job!

You should listen to my band The Neilkrophagist.

wwww.myspace.com/theneilkrophagist1

 

[acoustic.digital]

hey awdofgum,
really nice mood you try to aim at with your song, but... it needs a lot of improvement : )
if you want, pm me on msn, i can help you with fl and any other program you might use : )
check out my page (link in sig), there you can see what kind of music i write and what i'm capable of : )

chris

 

[BORTZ]

FL is a huge pain to learn. i have written songs too and i had to teach my self. ill up load later. nice song!

 

[arctic_flame]

Sounds like Animal crossing - could be good or bad depending on your opinion. I kind of like it.

Don't like the random pauses (they're very very short) where it sounds like you've copied and pasted a part.

 

[phoood]

wonderful melody in the beginning, just sounds unfinished.

 

[Gangsta_L]

I don't produce this kind of music with FL studio, but you did really great! The mix of everything is OK too, everything is in balance. Maybe a bit more variation in instruments, like give the keys a solo, and later give the keys just a background loop or something, and get a guitar to do a solo.

And as arctic_flame says, the random pauses really don't fit in. Especially with this kind of music, counting the beats is something you do unaware. If a beat doesn't fit in (like 1, 2, 3, and then a 1 instead of 4) it really hampers.

 

[RayorDragonFall]

I think you have the basics laid down. Don't give up, this could be a great tune.
I like the effects you do to the sound of the keyboard at around 0:55.

 

[JPH]

Sounds like Animal crossing - could be good or bad depending on your opinion. I kind of like it.

Don't like the random pauses (they're very very short) where it sounds like you've copied and pasted a part.

Yeah, the basics are definitely there.

It's relaxing, sounds nice. Kind of intrancing - until it cuts off unexpectedly.

You've definiately got something going, though. Keep us updated.

 

[gizmo_gal]

Its ok. I commend you for doing something useful with that software. It makes me feel like I'm on hold though, the song seems to be made up of 3 parts that just repeat and lap into themselves.

I still like it, but I would listen to it maybe once a week, not daily. It'd frustrate the doogens out of me.