ROM Hack Jump Ultimate stars Komas edition

[Anorhc]

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[ProjectVirtue]

The Kienzan koma looks pretty nice.
The Taiyoken koma seems kinda cluttered. Perhaps do it in the same form as the kienzan koma and put "solar flare" along the bottom where kuririn is

 

[Romruto]

The Kienzan koma looks pretty nice.
The Taiyoken koma seems kinda cluttered. Perhaps do it in the same form as the kienzan koma and put "solar flare" along the bottom where kuririn is

something like this? I had this for awhile but I wasn't sure if anyone would like it, I did, but hmmm.......lol

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and here's another Edit:

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[Chrono_Tata]

and here's another Edit:

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That one has a mistake. It should be "Now you're in for it." not "Now your in for it".

 

[Romruto]

and here's another Edit:

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That one has a mistake. It should be "Now you're in for it." not "Now your in for it".

done.

Thanks for spotting out the Grammer.

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[Romruto]

alright lets see.... From what I noticed, the Translation for Super Vegetto "vegito," there are different translations. The first time was "I am Super Vegetto!!" Then the second time, Demon Rin said it's translated based on the katakana character he gotten, which said "This is Super Vegetto!!" Now my translation is from the Anime itself "Call me Super Vegetto!!" Which do you think sounds good? I'm just pointing this out, because many translations here aren't perfectly accurate. Okay here are my Rebuilts of Super Vegetto.

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I am Super Vegetto!!

This is Super Vegetto!!

Call Me Super Vegetto!!

I'll just show my proof, it's all the way at the end of the episode: http://www.stage6.com/user/h4x0rm4573r/vid...254-Meet-Vegito

 

[geunt]

i think this is super vegetto is better because he talk about him as the 3rd person

BTW i ll upload all your last komas this night (good idea for your Krillin komas)

 

[Chrono_Tata]

done.Â

 Thanks for spotting out the Grammer.

No prob.

Anyway, maybe you all remembered a while back I did say I have multiple friends who are translators. Well, I managed to convince a couple of others to look at some of the translations that I thought were a bit weird and they made the following changes.

Gintama

Kagura 6-koma, "I'm not a Bonkyubon. Sorry about that." (Can anyone think of an English equivalent for Bonkyubon? Look it up for the meaning.)
Sougo 3-koma, "In order to not to hurt Zura and the plate, I/you/we have to hit them carefully.". (I still can't remember the context of this koma to translate it properly. Does anyone who reads/watches Gintama want to help? TT_TT)

Bobobo

Bobobo 2nd 6-koma, "Redhead Tomouro" or possibly "Redhead Tomorrow"

Henshin Engi

Ubou, 3-Koma, "Alright, we're flying now, Zuupu"

Unfortunately, those two are busy people and are not that interested in Jump series so I can't convince them to help regularly. XP There might be more changes on the way (and definitely more translations from Rin) so do look out for those.

 

[Demon Rin]

Yeah, they Basically helped by getting the more Obscure/Weirder ones XD

As for the Vegetto Translation... *Facepalms*
Ignoring the Fact that that's the Dub, it's Also the ANIME, The DRAGON BALL Anime!!
They changed that Line so they could Add Filler.
in the Manga, he Doesn't Fight Boo as Normal Vegetto, he IMMEDIATELY goes Super Right after saying "'Vegeta' and 'Kakarotto', what would that come out to... 'Vegetto' will do..."
Also, Way to go FUNimation! Change the Line that explains his namesake!!
They changed "Kakarot" to "Goku" in that Sentence. How the HELL does "Vegetto" or "Vegito" as they spell it, come from Vegeta and Goku?! Not To mention that in the english version, neither of those names has an I in it at all...

 

[geunt]

Gintama

Kagura 6-koma, "I'm not a Bonkyubon. Sorry about that." (Can anyone think of an English equivalent for Bonkyubon? Look it up for the meaning.)

There is 2 kagura 6 komas

so wich one ?

I ve upload your last komas
and i m updating the first page

You re gonna kill me

 

[Chrono_Tata]

There is 2 kagura 6 komas

 so wich one ?

I ve upload your last komas
and i m updating the first page

You re gonna kill me

Whoops. I meant the first one (with the chopsticks). Sorry about that. XP We're a bit disorganised.

 

[Demon Rin]

I saw the Kuririn Komas.
Honestly, I'm cool with Adding the Dub Terms at the Bottom for those who don't know, that way both fans can enjoy. but I'm glad the Terms the Viz Manga used are the more prominant ones in the frame XD

was taht what you were talking about Geunt? nobody's gonna kill you I don't think XP

 

[Romruto]

Yeah, they Basically helped by getting the more Obscure/Weirder ones XD

As for the Vegetto Translation... *Facepalms*
Ignoring the Fact that that's the Dub, it's Also the ANIME, The DRAGON BALL Anime!!
They changed that Line so they could Add Filler.
in the Manga, he Doesn't Fight Boo as Normal Vegetto, he IMMEDIATELY goes Super Right after saying "'Vegeta' and 'Kakarotto', what would that come out to... 'Vegetto' will do..."
Also, Way to go FUNimation! Change the Line that explains his namesake!!
They changed "Kakarot" to "Goku" in that Sentence. How the HELL does "Vegetto" or "Vegito" as they spell it, come from Vegeta and Goku?! Not To mention that in the english version, neither of those names has an I in it at all...

why are you getting mad? i did include 3 different version, chill out dude. Also, the one one you made wasn't appealing. "This is Super Vege SPACE -tto" and the side ones, it's hard to read.

 

[geunt]

Here s a clean edit from Naruto-lol, he works with the MFT scanlation team (french team)

this one is a bit weird so if someone want to try something else...)

as i said previously i like the idea of putting some dub term in the bottom
Very good idea romruto

 

[Romruto]

Here s a clean edit from Naruto-lol, he works with the MFT scanlation team (french team)

as i said previously i like the idea of putting some dub term in the bottom
Very good idea romruto

heheh thanks, i got the idea from the scanlations.

 

[Demon Rin]

why are you getting mad? i did include 3 different version, chill out dude. Also, the one one you made wasn't appealing. "This is Super Vege SPACE -tto" and the side ones, it's hard to read.

I wasn't talking about the rework of the Komas, I LIKE the Rework you did (except for the fact that it's perfectly round, I think you should have tried to make it spikey like the Japanese one, but I still like it xD) I was mostly commenting on the Video you posted.
and I'm not mad at you >_< Stop misconstruing all my Rants on the Dragon Ball Dub as Anger, I just happen to hate that Dub so I tend to rant a bit about it.

But, for Future Reference, you can't Trust the Dragon Ball Anime, Dubbed or Subbed, for Any of the Actual lines. Not only did the Dub Change most Everything, but Toei Changed a bunch of Stuff so they could add filler, so it's Nowhere NEAR the most Trustworthy Source.
the Viz Manga, and the Japanese Kanzneban (which I have) are what we should be using for Anything DB related
(and Like I said, I agree with your Idea of Putting in both the Dub Terms and correct ones, as long as the Correct ones are the more prominant in the Frame)

EDIt: AND YAY!! I was seriously just doing it because I was bored, but you Used My Sanji Cig Koma Fix!!
Thank you Geunt!!!

 

[geunt]

why are you getting mad? i did include 3 different version, chill out dude. Also, the one one you made wasn't appealing. "This is Super Vege SPACE -tto" and the side ones, it's hard to read.


I wasn't talking about the rework of the Komas, I LIKE the Rework you did (except for the fact that it's perfectly round, I think you should have tried to make it spikey like the Japanese one, but I still like it xD) I was mostly commenting on the Video you posted.
and I'm not mad at you >_< Stop misconstruing all my Rants on the Dragon Ball Dub as Anger, I just happen to hate that Dub so I tend to rant a bit about it.

But, for Future Reference, you can't Trust the Dragon Ball Anime, Dubbed or Subbed, for Any of the Actual lines. Not only did the Dub Change most Everything, but Toei Changed a bunch of Stuff so they could add filler, so it's Nowhere NEAR the most Trustworthy Source.
the Viz Manga, and the Japanese Kanzneban (which I have) are what we should be using for Anything DB related
(and Like I said, I agree with your Idea of Putting in both the Dub Terms and correct ones, as long as the Correct ones are the more prominant in the Frame)

EDIt: AND YAY!! I was seriously just doing it because I was bored, but you Used My Sanji Cig Koma Fix!!
Thank you Geunt!!!

Your cig is just well inserted ... so i need to get them in the game !
another edit from naruto-lol

 

[XellKamikaze]

What's with the sudden craze of removing the speech bubble?

Characters are talking, so the speech bubble should stay.. Not be removed.

 

[geunt]

Naruto-lol gives me some try on this koma....

and believe me this one was the better
we need to try to keep the bubble but when it s better without ....

for this one its keeping yusuke fighting style

another edit

He's on fire !

 

[XellKamikaze]

Naruto-lol gives me some try on this koma....

and believe me this one was the better
we need to try to keep the bubble but when it s better without ....

for this one its keeping yusuke fighting style

Well, I guess it does give the impression that the character is thinking what they are saying. It works well in that Yusuke koma, as his teeth are clenched and it doesn't actually look like he's talking.