A song I'm working on

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*Edit: Didn't see the music production thread, my bad :S*

I have been working on this song recently and I would really appreciate some advice. I know that there are musicians on here since the successful tempmas song-writing competition, so I thought maybe I could get some criticism.

When working on something creative, my judgement in my ability gradually diminishes the longer I work on a project. Having external input really helps my progress, I'm sure you all understand that anyway.



This version has cleaner vocals:

https://soundcloud.com/liam-fitzgerald-3/theif

hope you all had a good weekend :)
 

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