A song I'm working on

Discussion in 'Books, Music, TV & Movies' started by R4Liam, Mar 16, 2015.

  1. R4Liam
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    R4Liam Artsy Dude

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    *Edit: Didn't see the music production thread, my bad :S*

    I have been working on this song recently and I would really appreciate some advice. I know that there are musicians on here since the successful tempmas song-writing competition, so I thought maybe I could get some criticism.

    When working on something creative, my judgement in my ability gradually diminishes the longer I work on a project. Having external input really helps my progress, I'm sure you all understand that anyway.



    This version has cleaner vocals:

    https://soundcloud.com/liam-fitzgerald-3/theif

    hope you all had a good weekend :)
     
  2. kprovost7314

    kprovost7314 GBAtemp's Official Bara Master

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    In that bara manga ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
    Cool song!:toot: