I agree with both of these, especially the first one.Exhaust said:^
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"girls' tennis" and "given name/last name" sounds good to me.
Is it just me, or am I not able to access script 258 (Edit: Never mind. I misunderstood the offline thing.)? Also, I'm not sure if the policy changed, but I think people should turn off smart quotes. Slanted quotation marks are apparently not okay, but are slanted apostrophe marks okay? I'm changing them anyway, but...
Edit: I'm guessing we should use different highlights for the scenes like in the mails? I wasn't sure if the policy carried over, but now that I think about it, I'm not sure why it wouldn't.