enemies flavor? the text is outside of the box (look below, it's hard to read)
Ex ercising
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Since you edited the 第 kanji (number/numeral) to "Lv", it's also displaying "Lv" instead of 第 話 (chapter or End chapter) in the chapter Clear bonus window's title.
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I don't know if you can find a name to match both the dark world menu and the chapter clear window.
Maybe "Chapter", but it will not fit "Spirit Chapter10".
http://s5.filetrip.net/p/351/216116-pic_0066.jpg
Maybe just "Chap."
Or maybe just delete it or replace with spaces.
When you are in dark world you will see only the floor number ("Spirit 10" without "Lv" in front of the number), and the Clear bonus window will also have only "Clear bonus" in the title.
what do you think?
Same for "demon" when completing a Dark world
Do you know where "Demon" is used too? It's probably used elsewhere in the game. Deleting it without knowing what will be affected is not a good idea.
I guess here :
There's also an untranslated kanji there.
When in dark world, the menu says "Spirit Lv10"
when completing the dark world, the title says "Demon"
in the record girl, it says "Demon world"
I don't know if it's possible to harmonize the name.
chapter 4
We ll -> We will
Tradgey -> Tragedy ?
Chapter 5
Missing "to" somewhere in the sentence.
either "We need to access the" or "we need access to the"
I think I spotted a place with a missing text box.
the sentence wasn't complete and there was no other message after that.
It's when going to the royal castle, or in the library.
I'll probably start the chapter again anyway, I'll tell you if I notice it again.
edit:
I found it. It's the last sentence before the heart battle:
I guess it's missing a new text box with "her heart."
It was already reported here:
http://gbatemp.net/threads/psp-la-pucelle-ragnarok-translation.320662/page-35#post-5016643
You said you fixed it, but it's not fixed. Or maybe there's no other text after that? the sentence need rephrasing maybe.
http://gbatemp.net/threads/psp-la-pucelle-ragnarok-translation.320662/page-35#post-5017254
The cat's text is still untranslated.
I tried to exit the Heart level to the courtyard, talk to everyone and went back into the heart, to test if the game was freezing when saving like
Linka's report.
It didn't freeze.
I'm playing on real PSP. it was probably just a random crash.