Thanks for the excellent work on this patch. It really is the sort of quality I'd expect would require a team of paid professionals. Simply remarkable for a fan translation.
I'll admit I didn't actually play through the patched game, but rather watched a play-through on YouTube by ZSlyzer. As such my comments are regarding a version he played in late September, and may already be outdated. I only noticed two things that I'd suggest changing.
1) Late in the first case "Turnabout Target", Aboard the president's plane:
Knightley: You don't seriously have decisive evidence!?
Edgeworth: Hmph... Naturally.
Knightley: That's a big joke. Well come on now, show us!
Knightley: What is this so-called evidence!?
Edgeworth:
(The bullet that took Rooke's life. That's the decisive evidence I need...!)
Edgeworth: The location of this evidence... Is...!
(Interactive Choice - "I have it" / "I don't have it".)
I almost didn't mention this one, since the wording is subjective, but at the time I was totally caught with the wrong answer. The question threw me off because of a quirk in language. The subject in the line immediately prior to the question is ("the location of the evidence"), and I read the choice as "I have (the location)" instead of "I have (the bullet itself)". Since the missing monitor and broken glass is lampshaded earlier, and constantly visible in the scene, it seemed reasonable that the game would be ready for me to point this out. My suggestion would be rewording the line leading into the choice to something like "The decisive evidence... is located...", or changing the options to "I have the evidence" / "Somewhere else". But then, I'm probably the only one who thought this was confusing.
2) Early in the second case "Imprisoned Turnabout", during Sahwit's testimony (after logic chess).
Edgeworth: (
I see ... so during the 7 AM roll call, there was nothing amiss.)
Edgeworth:
(And Knightley's body was not in the workroom yet...)
Evidence: "Prison Roll Call"
Roll Call three times a day: at 7 AM, noon and 9 PM.
Body was found during 7 AM roll call.
The final line of the evidence label should probably read "was not found".
Anyways, thanks again to everyone involved. I hope you can see this through to the end. I can't even imagine sifting through all that dialogue -- the spacing, pacing, and turns of phrase. Gah. Good luck.