Tried to make a song using a girl being depressed as lyrics

campbell00

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Yeah, so I tried to make a song using a girl being depressed that I found on youtube as lyrics. I thought it turned out well, aside from a few mistakes. What do you guys think? I'm looking for constructive criticism, here.

And so you know, I'm not mocking depressed people: It's a phase that we all (me included) go through at one point. It's comforting, and almost funny to hear or think about it after you've gone through it and beaten it. In fact, it makes me thankful that I'm in a much better place right now.

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