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Discussion in 'NDS - Emulation and Homebrew' started by Rydian, Feb 22, 2011.

  1. azure0wind

    azure0wind GBAtemp Advanced Fan

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    Story = You're riding your car for your first journey, and you stop because you see a monster hold a big axe on his right and left hand blocking the road.
    ASCII = http://pastebin.me/d66a6d92426552f737a8d2d2b40b52d9

    Choices :
    1. Run for your life!
    2. Fight!
    3. Acts like you are one of them
    4. Tell nicely, asked it to move because it is blocking the road.

    Correct Choices:
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
  2. Kwartel

    Kwartel The fairest in all the land

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    The car broke down and you walk into a dark ally, looking for someone to fix your car, where a hairy topless guy tries to steal your shirt. What do you do?

    Can't make ascii art.. sorry.

    1. You kick him in the nuts.
    2. You let Victor kill him.
    3. You steal the joint of a tramp laying there and gives it to the topless guy.
    4. You run away, crying for your mom.

    1
    2
    3
    4
     
  3. spinal_cord

    spinal_cord Knows his stuff

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    somewhere
    How's this one?

    Story:
    Your new R43DSOMGWTF card has
    arrived, however it does not work as
    you expected it to.

    Art:
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    Choice 1: Cry to GBATemp Members.
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    Choice 2: Learn from it, buy a DSTwo.
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    Choice 3: Buy a different R4 clone.
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    Choice 4: Give up and exit the game.
    Warning: Spoilers inside!

    Choice Results:
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
  4. thegreatace

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    As you shop for your DSTWOWITWORKS, your anticipation for DS games only grows stronger with time.
    SNES games! GBA games! NDS Games! oh my! You hear pounds in your chest in anticipation
    as your checking out of "teh" store. Now you have to choose your shipping speed. do you...

    (no Pic) -edit in later
    a. ($0.00) take the slow boat home... lil' doodle (Seems an eternity) .
    b. ($10.00) strap it to the next available poke'mon flying to your local poke'mart.
    c. ($30.00) Have it transmitted through the internet to your microwave.
    d. ($50.00) your not satisfied with current technology's speed so you transport yourself through the microwave to your DSTWO

    a. the lil doodle was stolen by pirates on the high seas, or at least thats what china says.
    b. this time the poke'mon didn't faint, farfetch'ed was shot in duck season.
    c. you think it seems your choice is a happy medium, its not. now your microwave smells like burnt plastic.
     
  5. Slasher Zero

    Slasher Zero Advanced Member

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    You could do a story like :

    You look to the left and notice that your post man has a package for you :

    1. You take the post from him .
    Warning: Spoilers inside!

    2.You head to him to receive the package .
    Warning: Spoilers inside!

    3.You go buy Ice cream .
    Warning: Spoilers inside!

    4. You wait for him .
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    P.M me if this gets in the Home brew .
     
  6. Rydian
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    Rydian Resident Furvert™

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    Added up through Sheaperd121's story to the current source.

    Kurisuellegarden, there should not be sub-choices in a segment. While more than one way to survive is okay, after the user makes one choice the next choice is up to the next person in line.

    There's nothing to contribute, I finished the core before making this thread. Just need to fill it with content now. As for the source, it's literally nothing anybody that knows basic programming couldn't do. It's basic logic and writing text.

    EDIT: Updated the first post's submission guidelines, trying to make them look neat now.

    EDIT2: Beta 1 is uploaded.
     
  7. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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    Art: http://pastebin.me/d66a6d92426552f737a8d2d2b40e8da4

    Will you check if it looks squished? It's way below the 30x22 limit, but I made it directly in pastebin

    Story:
    *Continues after Slasher Zero's story
    After the police comes, they notice that you have a R4WHATTRHEWITZCLONE that is illegal in the land of RPGTemp and
    They question you
    You Say That...

    You were just trying to get a cheap flashcart to play Pokemanz on it

    THIS IS CORRECT:
    You say that the clone is a R4iDSN

    You say that you bought it before you knew it was a clone

    You say that you were about to destroy it
     
  8. ShinyLatios

    ShinyLatios Local "That Guy"

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    continues after thegreatace, his/her story was added so makes more sense to continue after him/her

    Crappy ASCII art
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    you can use this or the one below.

    after you're there Microwave teleporting style and got your SCDStwoWITWORKS, you decide to wait to be a l33t haxx0r and pirate games.
    you decide to go fishing. a temper comes walking to you and asks what you are doing.

    you say...

    A: iFish
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    B: I'm waiting for the right moment to test out my DS2
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    C: wanna see my DS2?
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
    D : just fishing.
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
  9. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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    thegreatace's and your posts don't give answers for the correct choice. What happens after you go fishing?

    BTW, I'm taking ASCII art requests.

    EDIT: Here's one for Post 85
    http://pastebin.me/d66a6d92426552f737a8d2d2b40e9fac

    EDIT: Here's one for Post 88
    http://pastebin.me/d66a6d92426552f737a8d2d2b40ec2e8 (Kadjan's Post)

    Anyways, to link post 88 to post 85 and so on, how about this


    Art: http://pastebin.me/d66a6d92426552f737a8d2d2b40eb6be
    Story:
    You're done fishing and decide to get some cleaning cloths for your DS
    You..

    CORRECT ANSWER
    You go home to see if you have some


    Go to your friends house and ask for some

    You go to Walmart and get some

    You go to GameStop to get some

    So Post 88 links with this post, which in turn links with post 85, which links with post 86.
     
  10. lukecop80

    lukecop80 GBAtemp Regular

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    over there
    Someone has to get murdered
     
  11. ShinyLatios

    ShinyLatios Local "That Guy"

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    Thegreatace's post states:so you transport yourself through the microwave to your DSTWOso your argument is invalid.
    I fixed mine too.

    but IDC. your timeline ius good
     
  12. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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  13. MatrixMaster3

    MatrixMaster3 Member

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    None of these even match up with how Kurisuellegarden's story ends. You go to your house, then you remember your work is closed, then you go down a path to a cave (Kurisuellegarden's story), then you're all of a sudden in a car fighting a burly guy? Then you're back in the car which now breaks down, then smoke a joint in an alley, then, you buy an R4 3DS card.

    First off, after Kurisuellegarden's story there is no continuation to when you find a car, then there is no continuation to how, after you smoke a joint, you magically appear back where ever you are and get that flashcart. READ THE FIRST POST. NONE OF THIS WORKS TOGETHER.

    These stories would all work together if kwartel's story included finding a car in the intro and spinal_cord's story included where you were (say, still in the dark alley?). Everything else is fine if Rydian edits them a bit. It's not the author's original work, but A) The story's being posted now have enumerable grammatical and spelling mistakes, and B) they carry almost no semblance of continuity. One sentence at the beginning of each of the story sections connecting them would help out quite a bit.

    /rant
     
  14. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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    Dude, no need to rage, this is a game.
     
  15. MatrixMaster3

    MatrixMaster3 Member

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    Nah, just frustrated bc I wanted to write a part.
    And I did add the /rant haha
     
  16. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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    Then make one!
    As you stated, Rydian can easily fix it, so no need to worry.
    It could also be explained by using the gold that you get to buy a car in azure's post.
    BTW: The most recent segment is post
    http://gbatemp.net/t280108-rpgtemp?view=fi...t&p=3498182
    87, which is my segment

    (It wasn't in order cause I had to create a new segment to link Kadjan's and Slasher's segments together)
     
  17. MatrixMaster3

    MatrixMaster3 Member

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    Alright, I shall come up with something soon.
     
  18. Ron

    Ron somehow a weeb now.

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    K, going for dinner now, if you want to make a request for ASCII art, PM me your post link.
    Just click the post number of your post and PM me the link in the box that pops up.
    I do it first come first serve.
     
  19. Nujui

    Nujui I need something to do.

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    Dreamland.
    Sort of feels weird having something I wrote in a game.
     
  20. Rydian
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    Rydian Resident Furvert™

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    I generally edit the first few/last words of a story to make it flow better with the ones before and after it, even if it's just adding "Then after blah blah you decide to" to the beginning is good enough for me.
     
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