Poems

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  1. SaiZou
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    SaiZou GBAtemp Regular

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    i need to make a poem(for school.....) and it must start with

    The wubbles are in trouble,
    And they don't know what to do.


    help [​IMG]
     
  2. tshu

    tshu On epic journey, brb.

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    they're blowing bubbles by the doubles,
    and they're blowing them for you.

    [​IMG]?
     
  3. Zendrik

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    Umm..
    What type of meter is it in?
    What rhyme scheme are you using?
    What overlying theme do you want? Happy, sad, hopeless, etc.

    Sorry for the questions but I write poetry all the time(some of my work has been published) and I always ask myself these questions before I begin to write.
     
  4. Mehdi

    Mehdi Lemonade by Psyfira

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    The wubbles are in trouble,
    And they don't know what to do.
    Their hopes are smashed to rubble
    "Why?" nobody knew

    The wubbles were in trouble
    That used to make them blue
    They popped it like a bubble
    By facing it as they grew


    Btw whats a wubble?
     
  5. Westside

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  6. Da Foxx

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    Haha, you guys are good. I suck a writing poems. Thats why I hate English. Maybe you guys can help me too. I need a personification poem. Object, Nintendo. : P I can't come up with anything. :S