need your opinions plz (for my ak2 rev)

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  1. pokemongalaxy
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    hey tempers,
    I just finished writing my acekard2 review(the review samples finally came today!!). I posted it here at gbatemp user rev, buut until its approved, its up on my site: dstemp.tk . Please read it and tell me your opinions, thnx.
     
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    cmon ...anybody?
     
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    I liked it not bad
     
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    thnx [​IMG]
    EDIT; you read the whole thing?
     
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    1.All product names should be named correctly. For example:
    acekard2==>Acekard 2
    acekard r.p.g.==>Acekard R.P.G.
    winrar==>WinRAR

    2.You seem to have forgotten to put spaces in a whole lot of places.

    3.Some sentences starts without capital letters.

    4.Some pictures are badly placed and the pictures lack quality. You should really learn to use macro...

    5.Less Caps and less smilies.

    This part is very hard to read, you should fix it.

    IMHO, you should have tested more games and homebrew.
     
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    I read parts 2, 3, and conclusion the rest I skimmed (which means i looked a t the section for like 2 seconds)
     
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    oh...k thnx [​IMG]
     
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    any more comments? there has to be more than this...
     
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    retake all your pictures so they aren't horrible. eg:
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    The junk on your desk is nice and clear, but the acekard is a blurry blob
     
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    That's why he should use macro and focus on the Acekard 2.
     
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    I guess I should fix the pics...
     
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    Nice pictures can cover up for quite a few mistakes.

    I could try to take some pictures of my Acekard 2 and see how they turn out tomorrow during daylight.
     
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    kewl, can u pm me the pics?
     
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    I'm going to lock this thread because I get the impression that your main reason for them being created is to advertise your site (as you did here). Even if this really isn't the case there are many other users (with their own sites) who haven't posted links to their site on so many occasions - so to be fair on these people I don't think you should be allowed to do so also.

    Once your review has been approved people can comment on it from there.
     
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