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I sent my story to you Sterling.
LAST TRY!!!
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Old8oy:

My name is Rob. I'm 27 years old from Michigan, U.S.A., a somewhat dreary place at times but the summers are nice. For a living I supervise inmates while they help me prep meals for a correctional facility. I've been husband for the past 3 1/2 years and a father for the past 2 months and 3 days.

My goals in life are to simply be there for and support my family.

My goal in writing is to articulate what I'm feeling at a particular moment in a way that makes it tangible to the reader. I seem to do that most easily through poetry but am working on my prose. I would like to put two novels on paper at some point in my life. Both are completely written in my head but I've not been able to translate the images to words.

I've grown up quite a bit over the past year. Made a few mistakes, some terrible, some wonderful. None of which would I ever take back despite the constant drain on me physically and emotionally. That's what pen and paper is for, right?
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So, without further ado...

My tagline:

C'est la Vie
Stercus Addidit
Hakuna Matata

Meaning:

Such is Life
Shit Happens
No Worries
 
@machomuu

why wait? I don't think anyone truly believes their writing skills are "polished". If you submit a review and it isn't accepted you'll at least be told specifics as to where to should focus most on improving.
 
I'm Arvind, 11, from Staten Island. I am going to Intermediate School 72. I have been accepted into SP classes, too. I don't think I should reveal too many things about myself, but to cut things short, I am academically and mentally (citizenship) excellent. I've been remarked with this term in many points of my first leg of my educational journey. My main goal is to become an orthodontist. Even so, people discourage me and say I should work in the technological area. I'm excellent for my grade in technology, but my parents and I think I should be an orthodontist. After all, who's going to take care of them after they retire? Also, I want to be there for my family. I want them to live happily for their life. I would do anything for the welfare of my family.

My Tagline
Jivana accha ya bura ho sakata hai
Koi bata nahim, basa kadama para
Kauna janata hai kya hoga?
Maim niscita rupa se nahim
Translation
Life can be good or bad
No matter what, just move on
Who knows what will happen?
I certainly don't
 
Weekly Challenge:

I'm Vince, just some dude from the Philippines. I'm 19 [20 in a couple of weeks], and would love to go on forever, wahahaha. I have a myriad of interests that people find weird [I swear it's them, not me... I think].

My personal goal is just to be there and be a good person for my family, friends and random strangers who aren't out for my head.

Writing-wise, my goal would be to get better [a whole lot better] and hopefully get a story of mine published some day [some day soon, LOL].


tag line:

Where you're more likely to find better written works than this tag line.
 
Hi, the name's Shyam (suprise suprise), and I'm 16, from London, UK. I've got plenty of interests, from the books I read, to the sports I play - Rugby, Tennis, Cricket, American football, Football - name it.

My goal in life is to be there for those who care for me - all the people who've stood behind me.

My goal in writing is to keep trying, until I hopefully get published - one day.

And, for the tagline:

A picture says a thousand words, but sometimes it only takes one word to paint a picture in your mind.
 
Who am I to say who I am?
I am but a mere creature, who survives and thrives
What we are is insignificant
We live to live, we die to not live

I cannot say who I really am
I cannot say what I really mean to me
I can only say who I am to me
I am just like everyone else

A perfect being that is imperfect
A blemish on the world's face of beauty
A beacon of light shining on the sea
Another person walking, talking and thinking

Vann. My name is Vann, and I'd like to make your acquaintance. To start, I am 14, seems young no? To be honest, I'm insane. Totally insane. Though I'd still like to be your friend, since I'm pretty friendly once you get to know me.

I live in a little [big] country known as the Philippines that happens to be a pacific-ish country in South-East Asia. I like the place, but dammit, the people can be so stupid and conservative. What kind of overpopulated country bans abortion and wants to ban reproductive health? Yes, a Catholic country, like ours.

I'm getting a tad bit off topic here, but in all seriousness, I think I may have some sort of problem. Though insanity always accompanies skill and (not trying to be boastful) I'm pretty skillful. Most especially in Math and English.

I digress. My goals? Uh, live, eat and pray? No, really, in writing it's to get my movie reviews and writings published in a major publication along with possibly writing a novel. For life, have a family, make a shit ton of money working in a bank of some sort, and living a comfortable lifestyle for the rest of my life. Simple as that, though more than that would be welcome.

Mors venit velociter quae neminem veretur
Death comes quickly and respects no one
 
Wow? I was kinda late when I noticed this... Can I still make an application?
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Reviewer Application

Always chris888222, no matter on any forum
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English? Spoken almost everytime, although I'm a little bad in grammar.
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Extremely active during the holidays. Even in the school term I still go on at least once.
Write? Not on this forum? Quite a lot I must say
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Reviews I have done on this forum? I think 3. I care more about quality than quantity.

3 reviews I've done:
iPhone 4 review
Nintendo 3DS review
Resident Evil: The Mercenaries 3D review

*fingers crossed*

Oh and sorry about so many emoticons, I love to use them
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KingdomBlade said:
Kind of inactive lately.

So.. I joined my school newspaper and decided to post an article (just a refreshing change of pace).

http://maristblueandgold.com/ws/?p=152

It'd be kinda difficult to transfer it here.. so eh. Any comments or suggestions?


Nice. You write features? I like the almost parody slant to it.
 
@Chris888222 - Seems Sterling hasn't responded to your application yet. Give him maybe another half-day or so [it is just after July 4th weekend], otherwise PM him. Pretty sure he'd love to have another reviewer. Best of luck, cya again here soon.
 
Shinigami357 said:
@Chris888222 - Seems Sterling hasn't responded to your application yet. Give him maybe another half-day or so [it is just after July 4th weekend], otherwise PM him. Pretty sure he'd love to have another reviewer. Best of luck, cya again here soon.
Hopefully
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July 4th is Independence Day right if I'm not wrong?
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