NO.
1. no train animation.
2. cloud does not sit on top of the train, hes inside of it.
3. the guards are already dead by the time cloud can move.
4. CLOUDS FUCKING HAIR DOES NOT BRIGHTEN WHEN USING MAGIC.
5. this is not Zelda 2, you are not meant to see enemies before they attack.
i could go on, but i wont.
You should try to outdo them by making your own remake!