EDIT: entered in contest
dont want judges to think i was cheating or anything >.<
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Ok, so that ^ was an essay i wrote for this scholarship thing
its not great, i know
and most of you wont even bother reading it (or you'll say something like tl;dr)
but if you see any mistakes, or have any suggestions
please do tell
its due on friday so speak up!
it is a true story, although some points may be a little exaggerated
like i dont know fully how to breakdance, but im learning still yeah?
dont want judges to think i was cheating or anything >.<
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Ok, so that ^ was an essay i wrote for this scholarship thing
its not great, i know
and most of you wont even bother reading it (or you'll say something like tl;dr)
but if you see any mistakes, or have any suggestions
please do tell
its due on friday so speak up!
it is a true story, although some points may be a little exaggerated
like i dont know fully how to breakdance, but im learning still yeah?