ROM Hack [Completed] Love Plus English Translation Patch

[Skyline969]

"checked by Skyline969: All Clear"

wasn't you supposed to write "Okay"?
It's confusing.

Whatever, all clear means the same as okay. Anyone with common sense can tell that.

 

[over9dud]

Just wanted to say Thank you soo much!! been waiting for this game to translated, hope you finish it soon.

 

[jjjewel]

I haven't checked the Google Docs scripts much. I'll try to check them on Sunday then.

For script checking, Okay, OK, All Clear, etc. are all fine.

For the scripts, the priority now is the scripts that involve choices and the mails.
Then maybe some more Manaka's scripts before moving to Rinko and then Nene.
But in case any one want to help with the translations, please let me know.
There are also some translations on TLWiki that I haven't put in the scripts yet.
(Some are obviously machine translation, so they are not quite usable. T_T)

I'll try to check for updates from other editors who are helping with the editing this Sunday too.

 

[X-Grunger]

woah woah woah
i tried the patch, great work dude i give you my total support

 

[aiRWaLKRe]

I might have to check this out, looks like an interesting game. Keep up the work on it

 

[OceanBlue]

I need to find more time for this. Good job for those who've been working (unlike me. )= )!

Also, cool, we have some editors who know Japanese onboard. That should make things less ambiguous.

Edit: I feel kinda unnecessary, since everyone seems really good at this. I guess I'll just scan through for slips or something.

 

[Skyline969]

I need to find more time for this. Good job for those who've been working (unlike me. )= )!

Also, cool, we have some editors who know Japanese onboard. That should make things less ambiguous.

Edit: I feel kinda unnecessary, since everyone seems really good at this. I guess I'll just scan through for slips or something.

Hey, everyone's part in this project is significant, regardless of the amount of work done. Like you, I'm busy with other matters (I run the website for MENUdo, so that also keeps me busy on top of schoolwork). Whatever time we can get in is sufficient, I'm sure.

 

[jjjewel]

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Yes, Skyline969 is right about that. So OceanBlue, please don't feel that you are unnecessary. We will have some more scripts for you to check later too.

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Manaka's scripts could be a bit messed up. Most of her scripts were translated and edited before I figured out the codes to check who's speaking which lines and how the lines are ordered. I've tried to fix them by myself but maybe I'll leave this task to you guys.

So, after I'm done with the mails, and the "yourself" scripts, I'll put Manaka's scripts for you to edit.

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By the way, if anyone plays the post-confession part with Real-Time mode, this week's event was mistranslated. It's supposed to be Critic Contest instead of Committee Evaluation. This will be fixed in the next patch. (It's not a big deal and it doesn't make much different in the game. Anyway, I think I should let you know.

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Edited:
For the script editing for files 292-295, I still need help editing these two dialogs. They appear many times in these files.

You got these messages when the spot level has increased. (Which means you've been there quite often and you know some quiet spots that people won't notice when you kiss your girlfriend.)

?????????????
???????????
???????????
+------------------------+
There's a quiet area here.
I can spend my time with
my girlfriend then.
*------------------------*

????????????
??????????
????????????
?????……?
+------------------------+
There's a secluded area
here. I can be alone with
my girlfriend then.
*------------------------*


The suggested translation is
Here's a quiet area where
I can spend time with my
girlfriend.

It's not the whole place that is a quiet area, but you find just some sports that are quiet. So the translation should be edited.

(You can just edit them in File 0293, at sections ///////0003/////// and ///////0004///////, and I'll add the translations to the rest (0294-295) later. Thank you so much.)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u5JdNdG...thkey=CK3nj74G#

(If I have some more stuff that I need help with, I'll edit this post.

)

 

[Exhaust]

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I guess the problem here is finding the right wording.

In that case, what makes the most sense to me is:

1) I remember a quiet area where I can spend time with my girlfriend.

2) I recall seeing a secluded area where I can be alone with my girlfriend.

I'll go ahead and edit them in file 0293 and if anyone has a better translation, feel free to make changes.

 

[jjjewel]

Thank you very much.

One more point for script editing:
When you see lines that look the same, don't try to make them different. Most likely, the game just reuses the same line.

For example.
001
I did it.
This feels great.
002
I won.
This feels great.
003
I finally passed.
This feels great.

The "This feels great." line is actually one line that is repeated 3 times.

I know some of you prefer different word choices and want to change "This feels great." in 002 and 003 to "This feels amazing." and "This feels wonderful." etc. But it can't be done for this game because they are actually just 1 line.

Also, don't try to rephrase the dialogs too often. This game usually reuses any lines that are the same.

For example;
001
I'm going to buy a CD.
002
I'm going to the park.

In many cases, if you change "I'm going to" to "I will" in 001, the output will be;

001
I will buy a CD.
002
I will the park.

 

[basher11]

crap!
i gotta re-do mine.

 

[Exhaust]

Anyway, it's quite complicated, so you can edit the scripts freely. But please don't feel bad if I reverted the changes or I reedited them.

Don't worry about it, I had a feeling that was the case so thanks for the heads up and feel free to change whatever that doesn't work.

 

[jjjewel]

crap!
i gotta re-do mine.

You are editing the mails, right?

They are different from the main dialogs, so your parts should be fine.

 

[Exhaust]

Update: All of the current open scripts have been edited.

Of course, I'm not perfect so there's bound to be a few mistakes here and there so it'd be great if someone else can give them a second once-over.

 

[greator]

Are the "Yourself" script includes the pre-confession and after confession?

oh wait, dumb question.

can you upload the girls main story script next? There's something off in their script. Especially Rinko's.

 

[basher11]

jjjewel!

my computer crashed and i lost my emails! (shame on me for not making backups!

)

can you send me the email txt? the google docs is gone?

 

[jjjewel]

Update: All of the current open scripts have been edited.

Of course, I'm not perfect so there's bound to be a few mistakes here and there so it'd be great if someone else can give them a second once-over.
Thanks you.

Are the "Yourself" script includes the pre-confession and after confession?

oh wait, dumb question.

can you upload the girls main story script next? There's something off in their script. Especially Rinko's.
-Yes.
-Will need to wait a bit. The girls' scripts are more complicated.

QUOTE(basher11 @ Jan 27 2011, 11:28 AM)

jjjewel!

my computer crashed and i lost my emails! (shame on me for not making backups!

)

can you send me the email txt? the google docs is gone?

-I just took the mails off line so I can put the translated part in the scripts. I'm translating the rest. Thank you so much.

 

[basher11]

ok. if i can, can i fix up some grammar errors?
i noticed some while playing.

or just send me the finished translation and i'll fix some up.

 

[OceanBlue]

Should most of the script in 306 and 307 match word-for-word? I was looking at 306 (I went backward) and noticed that there were some small differences between scripts, but they looked like copies with different events for the most part.

Edit: Also, the bad end makes me feel depressed about my high school experience.

304 has some inconsistent script formatting. Initially, these and similar phrases were formatted like this:

(I got a
"Billiard Ball.")

Later on, they changed to this:

(I got a "Billiard Ball.")

I changed it to the first one, but I'm curious as to which one we should be using.

Edit 2: Finished going through all the available scripts.

 

[jjjewel]

Should most of the script in 306 and 307 match word-for-word? I was looking at 306 (I went backward) and noticed that there were some small differences between scripts, but they looked like copies with different events for the most part.

Edit: Also, the bad end makes me feel depressed about my high school experience.

304 has some inconsistent script formatting. Initially, these and similar phrases were formatted like this:

(I got a
"Billiard Ball.")

Later on, they changed to this:

(I got a "Billiard Ball.")

I changed it to the first one, but I'm curious as to which one we should be using.

Edit 2: Finished going through all the available scripts.

As long as it fits the text box, either way is fine.

306 and 307 are events when you have the check points. They are very similar.

I'm trying to get Valentine's scripts done. (Now, almost done with the mails. Just 2 big files left for Nene.) If possible, the next patch should be out for testing before V-Day.
(Anyway, we don't seem to have enough time to check the scripts, so the next patch is for those who want to get some rough idea about V-Day conversation. There will probably be many grammar/English usage mistakes.

)