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Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by blackdragonbaham, Sep 22, 2009.

Sep 22, 2009

Comic by blackdragonbaham at 12:51 PM (1,044 Views / 0 Likes) 10 replies

  1. blackdragonbaham
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    Member blackdragonbaham GBAtemp Advanced Fan

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    aight boys and girls,
    i made this comic preview of my own, there are just five pages yet but i wanna continue drawing, so don't wonder that there is no obvious storyline yet. The reason why i post this thread is because i wanna know your opinion on the comic, and perhaps some advice and ideas how it could be made better or more atmospheric:. [​IMG]
    Klick here to view the comic pages

    thought about also uploading some of my pictures
    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
  2. toguro_max

    Member toguro_max GBAtemp Fan

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    The drawings "seems" to be fine, but it's too small to actually see something, even more reading...
    Is it inpired by Doom? >-p It looks like it is...
     
  3. MegaAce™

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    it's pretty good, i would say.
    my drawings aren't really better.

    and there's nothing to read there [​IMG] it's in german
     
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    Looks like Raiden from MGS [​IMG]
     
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    apart from that i suck at german, its pretty good.

    but try to make it a little better if you can, webcomics have quite big pictures...
     
  6. blackdragonbaham
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    so i added a page to the comic:.
     
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    so do you mean that the pages should be larger, or more detailed?
     
  8. MegaAce™

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    If you press on the picture twice, it zooms to original size.
    And if you take the original size, it's quite big for a sheet of paper.
     
  9. BORTZ

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    Honestly it looks good. I suggest making your drawings bigger and the text smaller. And i cant read german [​IMG] but you dont have to fix that haha
     
  10. Ducky

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    Thats talent! Wish I could do that =)
     
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    thx, thx:.
    now i increased the picture size from 750 x 1095 to 1700 x 2338, the pictures are not only bigger but also clearer:. the text is readable, assumed you can read german :-)
    + you have to click twice on the pictures to scale to fullsize
     

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