Abstract Short Film - Where Is My Mind

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Hey guys, just wanna share an abstract short film I've made entitled 'Where Is My Mind' after the song of the same name featured in the video. Critique and such is much appreciated, I'm just here to make films and do what I like to do :)

 

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"Where is my mind" - My reaction.

After many adventures in television production classes, I cannot take that song seriously.

As for the short film, the camerawork is noticeably shaky. I know it's supposed to be abstract, but the whole thing felt pointless, inconsequential, purposeless. I just didn't find myself connecting with it.

I wouldn't say it's bad or anything, but it definitely needs some work.
 

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"Where is my mind" - My reaction.
[media]http://www.youtube.c...h?v=NIgfiSzCy1o[/media]
After many adventures in television production classes, I cannot take that song seriously.

As for the short film, the camerawork is noticeably shaky. I know it's supposed to be abstract, but the whole thing felt pointless, inconsequential, purposeless. I just didn't find myself connecting with it.

I wouldn't say it's bad or anything, but it definitely needs some work.

I like this post! Thanks for some serious crit, yeah I know there's a lot of things wrong with it, and I know it's not bad, but it's not exactly good either. Well it's my first piece of film made entirely by me that's nt animation, so I can only get better from here, appreciate it dude :)

I actually like the song (before that bit it goes all pop/rock on my ass anyway)
 
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