Hopefully it's ok to post this here, just wanted to see your take on my non-chatgpt writing:
"samus: flynn, want to help me clear out a planet of x today?
doomguy: No. I went through...stuff, and I'm all out of gas.
Samus: Sorry brother, get some rest.
doomguy: No. I mean out of chainsaw gas. I need to go pick some up first.
Samus: The planet explodes in five minutes.
doomguy: if any get sent to oblivion, I can cause them more pain.
Samus: Well, there is this mother brain x.
doomguy: As long as it doesn't absorb the BFG, I can give the brain a stomp alongside the spider earlier.
Samus: you fought spiders too? Was yours a yakuza?
doomguy: It might as well have been."
"samus: *yelling* Ahh!
doomguy: normally I'm angry; what's up, or needs to be shot down?
Samus: It's raven beak! he's such a jerk, and yet he's just like me as far as his skills go.
doomguy: I met one of those.
Samus: but it's not just that, he uses unfair armor plating that requires counters.
doomguy: mine did too.
samus: oh...well I guess you go through that too. Did you try to beat yours up for trying to harm your family?
doomguy: he tried to attack our planet. And he might've been the one who went after daisy.
samus: flynn, that's not your fault. At least you didn't have to feel guilt for almost wiping out a species and then the last one looks up to you.
doomguy: that too, actually.
samus: really?
doomguy: some crazed doctor wanted me to do everything for him: get his physical form back, unleash...stuff, and he even betrayed me, so I broke one of his little gold orbs.
samus: sounds like a rough day; you need a girlfriend.
doomguy: No. I work alone. Well, except around you sis. What about you?
samus: well, there is this big guy.
doomguy: how big? *cracks knuckles and gets a berserk pack*
samus: No, no, he actually protected me from ridley once.
doomguy: once?
samus: long story, anyways gotta go, planet is about to blow up and quiet robe x just showed up. I'll call you on my visor later.
doomguy: I might take a nap for a bit, about to take my helmet off and get rid of this crimson armor fake of mine, see you later."
The goal was to design some funny banter, not use chatgpt, and try to keep samus and doomguy in character. Thoughts?
"samus: flynn, want to help me clear out a planet of x today?
doomguy: No. I went through...stuff, and I'm all out of gas.
Samus: Sorry brother, get some rest.
doomguy: No. I mean out of chainsaw gas. I need to go pick some up first.
Samus: The planet explodes in five minutes.
doomguy: if any get sent to oblivion, I can cause them more pain.
Samus: Well, there is this mother brain x.
doomguy: As long as it doesn't absorb the BFG, I can give the brain a stomp alongside the spider earlier.
Samus: you fought spiders too? Was yours a yakuza?
doomguy: It might as well have been."
"samus: *yelling* Ahh!
doomguy: normally I'm angry; what's up, or needs to be shot down?
Samus: It's raven beak! he's such a jerk, and yet he's just like me as far as his skills go.
doomguy: I met one of those.
Samus: but it's not just that, he uses unfair armor plating that requires counters.
doomguy: mine did too.
samus: oh...well I guess you go through that too. Did you try to beat yours up for trying to harm your family?
doomguy: he tried to attack our planet. And he might've been the one who went after daisy.
samus: flynn, that's not your fault. At least you didn't have to feel guilt for almost wiping out a species and then the last one looks up to you.
doomguy: that too, actually.
samus: really?
doomguy: some crazed doctor wanted me to do everything for him: get his physical form back, unleash...stuff, and he even betrayed me, so I broke one of his little gold orbs.
samus: sounds like a rough day; you need a girlfriend.
doomguy: No. I work alone. Well, except around you sis. What about you?
samus: well, there is this big guy.
doomguy: how big? *cracks knuckles and gets a berserk pack*
samus: No, no, he actually protected me from ridley once.
doomguy: once?
samus: long story, anyways gotta go, planet is about to blow up and quiet robe x just showed up. I'll call you on my visor later.
doomguy: I might take a nap for a bit, about to take my helmet off and get rid of this crimson armor fake of mine, see you later."
The goal was to design some funny banter, not use chatgpt, and try to keep samus and doomguy in character. Thoughts?
