Winter

[Snorlax]

Winter
By Snorlax

Winter is the dawn
of the glacial season.
A time when warmth
will retreat for no-reason.

The drought of the morning,
with the sun rising slow.
The fog moving ghostly
in an ever-swirling flow.

The chill of the ice,
as it rides the brisk lake.
The snow floating downwards
with slight-opaque flakes.

Winter is the dawn
of an annual turn.
A time for life
to turn cold and stern.

HAI MR. WINTER! Hurry the hell up and get to Australia already! D:

 

[playallday]

This isn't the right place to post this...

 

[Deleted_171835]

This isn't the right place to post this...

It might be if you think of art in a broad sense. Some people consider art to be the creative expression of someone. This is a poem. I guess you can say it's "creative expression"!

Good poem. Winter's awesome! Too bad, it's gone. Shitty summer awaits for me.

 

[Snorlax]

Good poem. Winter's awesome! Too bad, it's gone. Shitty summer awaits for me.
It'll be Winter soon in Australia! :3

QUOTE(Arctic @ Apr 6 2010, 10:03 PM) This isn't the right place to post this...

It's a type of art. :]

 

[rooshidavid]

I am supportive that it is art session so, it is obvious that such post should be posted here. The poem is very simple and cute. It smells out as if it is composed within 4 to 5minutes. My perception states that it can be improved and can be more articulate. Also it needs editing for language and also for rhyming words.

 

[Snorlax]

I am supportive that it is art session so, it is obvious that such post should be posted here. The poem is very simple and cute. It smells out as if it is composed within 4 to 5minutes. My perception states that it can be improved and can be more articulate. Also it needs editing for language and also for rhyming words.

I wrote this two years ago and just recently posted it.
I too think that I could improve word usage and rhythm, but I'm not planning on publishing any poetry books (yet).

 

[fannnkobe]

Awesome

 

[Snorlax]

Awesome

Again, thankyou.