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Nice colors... very muted and melancholic. Two things I can nitpick about... 1. The stop sign is on his right, but he looks left and 2. The top edge of the seat and his eye in the 3rd panel converge, almost feels like the line enters his head. But great job, has a PBF feel to it. You sir, get a gold star.
 

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Nice colors... very muted and melancholic. Two things I can nitpick about... 1. The stop sign is on his right, but he looks left and 2. The top edge of the seat and his eye in the 3rd panel converge, almost feels like the line enters his head. But great job, has a PBF feel to it. You sir, get a gold star.
thanks, he looks to his left just because he's bored, and just points out he's not entirely sure if the sign talked, since he wasn't looking, regardless - he decided to go.

and the lines converging, I never noticed but I guess
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The animated version is a million times better. Not a bad little strip/animation.
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I like the brush stroke style and the cute full car model (reminds me of Bill Waterson's style of drawing cars - except it isn't levitating!)
 

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I'm pretty sure you've posted it here before, or maybe I saw it on your site or something.
Anyway, I still think it's cool, and am loving the animation.
In fact, if you wouldn't miiiiiind... I'd kinda like to throw a little soundtrack on it maybe.
Just a thought.. I'm scarce on time right now, but next week my free time will be more largely partitioned...
I've often entertained the thought of all the GBAtemp "golf pros" getting together on a jam.
Wouldn't that be weird?
 

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Cute, loving the minimal, washed-out colours
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The animation's easier to understand in the middle but they both work really well. Nice
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I'm pretty sure you've posted it here before, or maybe I saw it on your site or something.
Anyway, I still think it's cool, and am loving the animation.
In fact, if you wouldn't miiiiiind... I'd kinda like to throw a little soundtrack on it maybe.
Just a thought.. I'm scarce on time right now, but next week my free time will be more largely partitioned...
I've often entertained the thought of all the GBAtemp "golf pros" getting together on a jam.
Wouldn't that be weird?
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you can do whatever you want with it
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hmm, I'm sure it was here... and a lot of people complained and said "it isn't funny" and were jerks...

because, I don't know any other forum that I visit.... even less were we both are
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