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Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by .TakaM, Apr 2, 2007.

stop

by .TakaM Apr 2, 2007 at 7:02 AM 1,241 Views 18 replies
  1. .TakaM
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  2. pewpz

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    Nice colors... very muted and melancholic. Two things I can nitpick about... 1. The stop sign is on his right, but he looks left and 2. The top edge of the seat and his eye in the 3rd panel converge, almost feels like the line enters his head. But great job, has a PBF feel to it. You sir, get a gold star.
     
  3. Takeshi

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    Nice! [​IMG]
     
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    thanks, he looks to his left just because he's bored, and just points out he's not entirely sure if the sign talked, since he wasn't looking, regardless - he decided to go.

    and the lines converging, I never noticed but I guess [​IMG]
     
  5. Sinkhead

    Sinkhead yay p1ngpong.

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    Nice work but it's a little hard to understand.

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  6. tshu

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    I think it would work well as an animation. Good work.
     
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    hmm, havn't I seen this before? without the yellowness?
     
  8. .TakaM
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    I did animate it (lazily) back when it was just plain black and white:
    [​IMG]
    it works a bit better that way
     
  9. shaunj66

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    The animated version is a million times better. Not a bad little strip/animation. [​IMG]

    I like the brush stroke style and the cute full car model (reminds me of Bill Waterson's style of drawing cars - except it isn't levitating!)
     
  10. thegame07

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    [​IMG] i like it. nice work
     
  11. mthrnite

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    I'm pretty sure you've posted it here before, or maybe I saw it on your site or something.
    Anyway, I still think it's cool, and am loving the animation.
    In fact, if you wouldn't miiiiiind... I'd kinda like to throw a little soundtrack on it maybe.
    Just a thought.. I'm scarce on time right now, but next week my free time will be more largely partitioned...
    I've often entertained the thought of all the GBAtemp "golf pros" getting together on a jam.
    Wouldn't that be weird?
     
  12. Psyfira

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    Cute, loving the minimal, washed-out colours [​IMG] The animation's easier to understand in the middle but they both work really well. Nice [​IMG]
     
  13. Sinkhead

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    Yeah, the animation is much better

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  14. .TakaM
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    [​IMG] you can do whatever you want with it [​IMG]
     
  15. mthrnite

    mthrnite So it goes.

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    uh oh...
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  16. .TakaM
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    [​IMG]
    I just went through all my posts.. I don't think I posted it here.. mustve been somewhere else
     
  17. rest0re

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    nice! no crits needed imo
     
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    I love the perspective on the stop sign in panel 6. Nice work.
     
  19. Issac

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    hmm, I'm sure it was here... and a lot of people complained and said "it isn't funny" and were jerks...

    because, I don't know any other forum that I visit.... even less were we both are [​IMG]

    strange....