Sterling's Silver Shelf

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by Sterling, Feb 13, 2011.

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Which story would you like to see finished?

  1. The Quickening Heart (Late Night Story to some)

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  2. The Unreal Fantasy

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  3. True Love Never Dies

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  4. Working Title

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  1. Sterling
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Hour of Darkness - Finished
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    The Stag
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    True Love Never Dies *WiP* - Updated 3/21/11
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    Unnamed Title *WiP* - Updated - 3/21/11
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    Tempmas 2009 Entry
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    The Unreal Fantasy - Story *Unfinished*
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    The Quickening Heart *Unfinished* Last update: Nov29, 2009
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    Poetry
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    Flails - Poetry
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    The Unreal Fantasy - Poetry
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  2. Sterling
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Alright, I finished my story. [​IMG]
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    I revised it a bit on the RS forum, so I updated the changes here. Nobody wants to reply? I'm already satisfied with the feedback I got from the RS forums, but I would like a few from here as well.
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Well, I added another story. It's unfinished, but it's progressing nicely. I guess I'll continue to update and bump it after every major update. However, it sucks that no one has replied yet. >.
     
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    Added a new story, a WiP of course, but I'm gonna have a lot of free time on my hands so it should be updated a bit soon. (Someone please read a story or two and reply. [​IMG] )
     
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    Dreamland.
    There's a mess up in hour of darkness.

    "Think and thin" Isn't it suppose to be "Thick and thin"?
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Yea lol, there are quit a few typos in each of them. I'll read through them some and edit them regularly when I find them.
     
  8. Nujui

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    Dreamland.
    Here's are some other typos.

    The fighting died down as another one of their can members was dragged away screaming

    the fist skiller returns with more wood

    They nodded and handed to fish to our cook
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Thanks man, I appreciate it. The RS forums have a character limit for every post, so sometimes I had to shorten or delete a word, and I sometimes overlook a few things.
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Well, it seems many of us have been inspired to post our artistic dabbles here. I attribute it to Dusky.

    Question of the bump -
    Which unfinished story would you guys like to see finished the most?
     
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    Alrighty, I added some neat poetry from the RS forums that I did. [​IMG]
     
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    Added a new short story entitled: "The Stag".
     
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    Sterling GBAtemp's Silver Hero

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    Bump for good measure. Still need more feedback.