Thank you for the translation!
I have a suggestion, though. I did notice that there seem to be a little discrepancies with the font (which, by the way, has been used in many other Nintendo DS translation patches AFAIK).
Namely, the apostrophe and the quotation marks are a little too small and the exclamation mark should be shifted one pixel closer to the last letter (see the screenshots where there are exclamations, where they are one pixel farther away than they should be?)
I've got a screenshot from another translation that uses this kind of font in the game, and that might help you adjusting the font accordingly.