need help on my minecraft parody.

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ok so basically I don't feel its epic enough to start working help would be very appropriated! original song is Ms. Jackson by Outkast

[Intro: André 3000]
Yeah, this one right here goes out
To all the guys's diamonds' diamonds
diamonds, diamonds, guys diamonds' diamonds
Yeah, go like this

[Hook: André 3000]
I'm sorry, Mr. Persson, I am for real
Never meant to make your lawyers cry
I apologize a trillion times
I'm sorry, Mr. Persson, I am for real
Never meant to make your lawyers cry
I apologize a trillion times

[Verse 1: Big Boi]
This guy just don't like me
He be doin' things like havin' them boys come from his neighborhood to the server, tryna troll me
He need to get a piece of the Swedish cake and take his bite out
That's my house, I'll disconnect the cable and turn the server off
And let him know his game is precious and shouldn't sold out
Private servers, realms, shit, server bills—I pay that
I love your game and everything
But see, I ain't the only one who laid down
We all just disapointed you sold out.
My gamers stayed down
Shit, you never got a chance to hear our side of the story
We was Gamers
We had Fun times and Hunger Games for my own birthday
But you ain't invited, despite it
I show you the utmost respect when I can though
All you do is defend that cash when I call you, yeah

[Hook]
I'm sorry, Mr. Persson, I am for real
Never meant to make your lawyers cry
I apologize a trillion times
I'm sorry, Mr. Persson, I am for real
Never meant to make your lawyers cry
I apologize a trillion times