My first re-color

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by AlanJohn, Nov 13, 2011.

  1. AlanJohn
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    Please give me your critiques. This is my first time I've ever done something like this.
     
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  2. Nujui

    Nujui I need something to do.

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    That actually looks pretty well done.

    Nice job.
     
  3. Gahars

    Gahars Bakayaro Banzai

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    Actually pretty good. Of course, it would be better if you colored in all the details of another picture, but that's another matter entirely.
     
  4. kevan

    kevan Imagination rules the world

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    Looks nice ^_^
     
  5. 4-leaf-clover

    4-leaf-clover SHSL LUCKSTER :/

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    It really looks good for your first time, Great job bro!
     
  6. Cyan

    Cyan GBATemp's lurking knight

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    Color choice is very good, but missing some contrast.

    the face expression is more visible in the original
    the colored one seems like he is just opening the mouth, while the original looks more disgusting.

    you need more dark on the left (left from the picture) part of tongue (the part under it), and add back the "reflects" on it (little white dot, and the line are not visible enough) to show the skewing.
     
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