Four Songs I Wrote [hip hop]

[rad.i.kal]

I have four songs out, i feel awesome about it, it took a lot to get to where I could record and feel comfortable.

Please let me know what you think!

https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/emceerad/doom
https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/emceerad/empire
https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/emceerad/enterprise
https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/emceerad/muxharl-the-mighty

 

[Alexander1970]

Hello.

I like Doom and Muxharl.
From this Muxharl is my Favorite.

Very nice Tunes.Thank you for Sharing.

 

[Chains]

Want my honest opinion? Its cringey as hell man. I don't like this soy "rap".
You gotta get better beats, not the ice cream truck ones you're using now. Also work on your flow/breath technique.
The vocab & wordplay was extremely weak, your metaphors are basic too, not trying to be mean here.
If you level up those things, then perhaps you'll make a better track in the future. Read more books, freestyle to different beats, it'll help.