Four Songs I Wrote [hip hop]

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rad.i.kal

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Want my honest opinion? Its cringey as hell man. I don't like this soy "rap".
You gotta get better beats, not the ice cream truck ones you're using now. Also work on your flow/breath technique.
The vocab & wordplay was extremely weak, your metaphors are basic too, not trying to be mean here.
If you level up those things, then perhaps you'll make a better track in the future. Read more books, freestyle to different beats, it'll help.
 
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