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ignite339 said:
pokemongalaxy said:
Yes!! THis is what supercard team emailed me when I showed them my m3ds simply user review:
Dear nintendo microsoft,

Thank you for your email. Would you like to let me know your local place?

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
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meaning theyll send me the sample products. A new review will be on the way!!!
You said your name was Nintendo Microsoft?

Nintendo Microsoft?
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maybe it's just his email ~
 

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lol yes, I changed it though. Just dont like giving my real name. For a second when I sent that email, Im just like : awww sh** im screwed, they wouldnt give a flashcard to nintendo...or microsoft.
 

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Sephiroth said:
ignite339 said:
pokemongalaxy said:
Yes!! THis is what supercard team emailed me when I showed them my m3ds simply user review:
Dear nintendo microsoft,

Thank you for your email. Would you like to let me know your local place?

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
"
meaning theyll send me the sample products. A new review will be on the way!!!
You said your name was Nintendo Microsoft?

Nintendo Microsoft?
wtf.gif


maybe it's just his email ~
I just chose nintendo microsoft cuz my email was [email protected] . My real name was already taken, lol
EDIT: WHAT OTHER FLAShCARD DEv TEAMS SHOULD I EMAIL?
 

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Ok first stop double and triple posting!
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And the head of your page is modchip galaxy, shouldn't that be flashcard since flashcards aren't modchips huh? Plus modchips are kinda more illegal than flashcards...
 

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Bruinbaard said:
Ok first stop double and triple posting!
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And the head of your page is modchip galaxy, shouldn't that be flashcard since flashcards aren't modchips huh? Plus modchips are kinda more illegal than flashcards...
flashcards are modchips...that's what I thought. They both have the same legal measures
 

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pokemongalaxy said:
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One big suggestion, learn to check through your spelling. Your M3DS Simply review has quite a few misspellings.
Yes I know, I sordof rushed it...thnx for the critisism though
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big mistake, how are you going to attract members if it looks so unprofessional? if you don't put the time and effort in I don't see how you would be able to do so.
 

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dice said:
pokemongalaxy said:
Minox_IX said:
One big suggestion, learn to check through your spelling. Your M3DS Simply review has quite a few misspellings.
Yes I know, I sordof rushed it...thnx for the critisism though
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big mistake, how are you going to attract members if it looks so unprofessional? if you don't put the time and effort in I don't see how you would be able to do so.
yes I know, Im going to fix the typos. Its just that I was rushing it so much cuz I wanted to show it to the dev teams....and I just wanted it done but still complete
EDIT: I may also add more pics to it and perhaps vids
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"I need some opinions"

*Hands you a box of opinions and walks away*


Anyway, I think that the lay out is pretty bad. But I'm using a widescreen monitor so it may just be this way for me.
 

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gizmo_gal said:
"I need some opinions"

*Hands you a box of opinions and walks away*


Anyway, I think that the lay out is pretty bad. But I'm using a widescreen monitor so it may just be this way for me.
The layout looks pretty good to me, just needs a better background...maybe I should change the template?
 

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Dude... 3 posts in a row... There IS an edit button ok?

And using "temp"... isn't that a "little" cheap? Even if you got inspiration from here, in the end it's just copying a good name.
 

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Dude.. Your acting really negitavily.. (I hope I managed to spell that word)

His inspired by temp of making a nice site to review carts.. Whats soo bad about it? I'd say its an awsome idea.. and i'm willing to help him.

Instead of letting people down , Just shut up . Better like that.
 

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Ducky said:
Dude.. Your acting really negitavily.. (I hope I managed to spell that word)

His inspired by temp of making a nice site to review carts.. Whats soo bad about it? I'd say its an awsome idea.. and i'm willing to help him.

Instead of letting people down , Just shut up . Better like that.
thanks for offering to make reviews and such. Would you like to partner up? pm me,k?
 

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I've got one: Stop double posting. Use the Edit button, thats what its there for.

EDIT:

Okay, I checked the site, it--the layout--isn't as bad on a regular full screen monitor as it is on "widescreen" (I hate widescreen, ugh!)

Anyway, the background picture is lame, don't let it be a repeated picture, I dont know why but I find that very unattractive 9 out of 10 time on sites. Especially plain ones.

The specifics of your site needs to be tweaked, in my humble opinion. That part with giant letters announcing the sites under construction just screams "amateur" and not in the admirable way.
Try making a subtler graphic that announces the site is under construction and place it menu as a link back to a "Feeback" form, so that anyone who comes can leave a bit of feedback or advice for you on the matter.

Also, I'm going to just say it, but I hate the sites name. Homage or not to gbatemp, I feel that 'dstemp' is just weak. You can take that bit as you like it, I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, or even tell you to change it, I'm going to let you know that if I stumbled across your site and noticed the name, I'd laugh, roll my eyes, and say "Puh-lease. Wannabe." and hit the back button on my browser. I just would, and I feel that most people who see your site--if they've ever seen this one--wont appreciate you "Eating from GBAtemps plate", so to speak, even if they do understand its supposed to be to honor GBAtemp.

And your reviews--I didn't read it all--but they seem good, but I highly recommend adding links to the "Contents" portion so that people can easily skip to the portions that they want to read, and I think that the formatting--or lack there of, in your reviews is a bad thing.

INSERT EDIT:
Also, I think your site needs a logo, to make it memorable and all to really stand out.

And I recommend you use Video Reviews along side your text ones, as GBAtemps pretty "famous" for their in-depth text reviews so you've gotta do something they don't already have. Use effects and background music to make yours stand out from the other youtube Video Review--it'll really help. And be personable in your videos if you do make any, as personality counts also.

Okay, thats my two cents on the matter, do what you can with it, or else leave it where it stands, thats all I can say about it.
 

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gizmo_gal said:
Check my above reply
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saw it.thnx.
Ill probobly keep dstemp.tk, but I may make another doamin, probobly like modgalaxy.tk or something which will be the main one. Ill change the background,make comment area(perhaps forums...?!), video reviews (real good idea
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Ps: Im working on a site banner already....
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pokemongalaxy said:
gizmo_gal said:
Check my above reply
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saw it.thnx.
Ill probobly keep dstemp.tk, but I may make another doamin, probobly like modgalaxy.tk or something which will be the main one. Ill change the background,make comment area(perhaps forums...?!), video reviews (real good idea
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), and few other stuff.
Ps: Im working on a site banner already....
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Glad that I was able to help in someway. I'll be checking back everynow and then to see how you're doing.

I think that a forum would be a little ambitious and unnecessary at this point, especially since you said your sites purpose is to host your reviews. I say link the forums to GBAtemp.net, that way you dont have to worry with modding it when its very feasible that it'll get only like 13 real members and 15 million spam bots to post on it once every blue moon or so.

Use the site banner in your signature and use your prizerebel banner on the site. I think that'd be better also. I would suggest that even if your leave your prizerebel banner on your GBATemp that you leave it as the only banner--dont do two banners in one sig, okay?
 

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k im going to link it to the temp(gbatemp) forums
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good idea
EDIT: well for now, Ive added a quick banner (at bottom of home page), and linked to the gbatemp forums!
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