I watched one minute of it, and I can already tell you this:
- The clips suck
- The quality is absolutely horrible (honestly, it's worse than most easycap footage I've seen - start messing with your recording settings, and edit better)
- The editing is poor
The dualtage is a 1/5, and that's being nice. Even for a beginner montage, it would have only been acceptable maybe three or four years ago.
- Try to make the feed clear: if you start feeding, people want to see your name popping up there to /know/ you were.
- Improve the quality, period. I don't know what capture card you use, but like I said, even an easycap can do better. Trust me, I have a friend who was stuck using an easycap for ages, and even though easycap quality is fairly unacceptable all on its own, people still liked the montages he put together (though the feed was still unreadable).
- Better clips. Seriously. Quickscopes aren't any good on their own unless you get a feed of at least three. No-scopes are no good unless they're blind, cross map (and that's still not very good these days), or utilized as part of a trick shot (in which case, you know, it's just the trick shot). If you can't trickshot, you either better get really good at grabbing large feeds, or learn how to trickshot a bit. You're entering a community where people make money off of the montages they make. You'll have to do better than the standard CoD player if you want views, much less recognition.