My New Song

[Lanexi]

Well Guys I just finished today its my first actual submission and work tell me what you guys think and vote if you can

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/305127

 

[playallday]

FL right?

 

[Lanexi]

Yes

and i also have a beat box for making trance beats

 

[Hatsu]

Awesome. Downloading right now

 

[playallday]

Yes

and i also have a beat box for making trance beats

One thing to work on, right now it sounds too perfect. Make it a little off beat.

 

[CannonFoddr]

Sorry to be a little nit-picking but technically that's not a 'song'

Spoiler: song definition

song (sô?): noun

1. the act or art of singing to break into song
2. a piece of music sung or composed for singing
3a. Old Poet. poetry; verse
3b. A relatively short metrical composition for, or suitable for, singing, as a ballad or simple lyric
4. A musical sound like singing the song of the lark

But for a 'Music Track'

- Congratulations

 

[Deleted_171835]

It's great!

I saved this on my Zune! I rarely save tracks on my Zune but this is awesome!

 

[BORTZ]

Pretty good pretty good.
Keep em coming man!