I made an animation!

[chrisman01]

Remember that post I made waaay back about video game violence?

http://www.gbatemp.net/index.php?showtopic...mp;entry2275496

That was for an essay I had to write in English. However, I got the chance to use the same topic in a final for my media class!

I made a Flash animation, and after a week of working on it, I'm proud to say HERE IT IS:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/521143

Please rate and review it! It's my very first Flash animation, and I'm proud of it!

 

[Guild McCommunist]

VERY NICE!

5/5. I thought it was quite funny AND educational.

I've made a few short animations in my life time but nothing as good as this.

 

[airpirate545]

For a first this is very good. It helps deliver the message clearly and the bg music is very pleasant. How'd you learn how to do this, this type of flash animation would be wonderful for some of my school projects.

 

[Law]

Gave it a five, and agree with one of the reviews. It should go on TV as an advert.

 

[Burnedmagix]

lolnotmuchofanimation

cuz of those motion tweens and stuff

but srsly, this could be a real commercial if it had some professional tweaking

 

[chrisman01]

For a first this is very good. It helps deliver the message clearly and the bg music is very pleasant. How'd you learn how to do this, this type of flash animation would be wonderful for some of my school projects.

I took a class for MX 2004 a while back, but MX 2004 and CS4 (which is what I use now) are very different.

Mostly motion tweens, but I came up with the characters myself, and the "retro film" effect I made is just a transparent brown with one line being tweened.

 

[BORTZ]

I mean absolutly no disrespect with my following comments.

Burnedmagix is right, its not really animation, but thats for us nitpickers to decide in our stuffy dorms while we read Richard Williams's "Animators Survival Kit" and eat boxes of pizza.

However, i still enjoyed it greatly. I give you props from 1.) doing a killer job, and 2.) not procrastinating. two thumbs up dawg!

 

[its xNIGHTMAREx]

Nice!

thumbs up! Only thing is the words went by a little fast and I missed a few things. Other than that though it was awesome, especially for your first one!

 

[chrisman01]

Wow! Thanks guys!

I probably would have had a lot less tweening if there wasn't a deadline I had to finish on. Tweening is the lazy and/or pressured animators friend

As for the words going by too fast, sorry about that. I thought I had made it slow enough, but I guess not... It's due tomorrow morning, so I don't want to spend another hour or so slowing it down more (it's already 10PM here)

 

[chrisman01]

OH MY GOD!!

I MADE TOP 10!!

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1129852

 

[BORTZ]

Awesome dude! making top ten is a kinda prestigious thing on Newgrounds.

 

[alidsl]

I missed a few words on the pages with all the writing

4/5 (soz bit too fast)

 

[berlinka]

Well done! I would also give praise for the music. I noticed that you did that yourself too? BRAVO!