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WE ARE THE EPIDEMIC
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Looks much better I think, you could also do different shades of grey in the letter boxes to add more intrest, otherwise i think the whole thing works rather well

yep it will look good on a poster
 

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The band name's getting drowned under the hazard tape, I know hazard tape is suppposed to be high-vis but it's not supposed to be the main focus of this piece and it's not doing your logo any favours here. Try making the writing on the tape smaller and don't make it bold, consider fading the colour if it helps.

The spreading pattern on the background is good, but the red watercolour paint could use a bit of tweaking if it's supposed to be blood. Blood's thicker than that and not quite as pink-water-y.
 

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