A new magazine! with your feedback!

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by Reaper, Oct 13, 2009.

  1. Reaper
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  2. Splych

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    Hmm...? I like your Game Magazine better ^^
     
  3. benjaminlibl

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    I thought the magazine title was a little small.
     
  4. anaxs

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    your moms jeans pocket
    oh men..that looks ok, pretty country looking
     
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    Country looking? What's that supposed to mean? [​IMG]
     
  6. blackdragonbaham

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    mmmh:. it's good, but somehow the first one was better:. more harmonic colors^^


    here an idea of the side bar i meant'

    Warning: Spoilers inside!
     
  7. MegaAce™

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    [​IMG] Normal magazine covers are filled with text, so that you could not see the picture, nowadays.
     
  8. Psyfira

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    Um... you can't submit anything with celebrity photos, game renders or edited random images you find online to DeviantArt, it breaks the site's usage policies.

    That aside, I prefered the game magazine cover as well, though I can't quite put my finger on why. I like the font on the Killer's item but it's a bit too powerful for use on both the heading and the second line, it makes the font on the other story look bland. I think the title's a little bit too high up too, the black music note doesn't feel like it's part of the title graphic.
     
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    At least my account's not popular at all [​IMG]
    but I'll stop making these for a bit [​IMG]
     
  10. Shardnax

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    If it is a royalty free picture then you're fine. And since you're not actually selling a magazine so they probably won't care. You have a real knack for setting up the layout on these covers, so don't quit.