Your enshlig is good.
I played the game up to end of level 2.
The battle system is very easy and at the same time can be very tricky.
some questions :
is there some interest in killing the special enemies? (the grey ones)
is there a count, does it unlock something? or just more exp?
is there a need to clear the levels from all enemies? (return back if they are in respawn state)
or again, just for exp?
edit:
@Nagato:
You asked to report conversation which could feel strange, because some sentences were without context.
here things I noted which might look strange. Maybe they are not for you, as english is not my mother tongue.
All happened on level 2.
• Girl speaking:
it's hard to concentrate when you get attacked monsters.
I think this is what I read, but as I can't read logs of the girl, I'm not sure. if that's the sentence, it's missing "by" monsters.
• conversation
- How is everyone holding up? should we retreat to the base?
- there's also that...
The reply don't make sense to me. what does "that..." means here?
• conversation
- Hey Cyan, what's with you?
- Don't say mean things!!
I'm not sure if the question should be "what's up with you?"
and I don't think the reply matches the question at all. or I don't understand that conversation.
I hope it helps and that I'm not reporting wrong things
both were only two messages long conversations, there's nothing before or after.
Edit:
good you didn't read/reply here yet, I found another one:
in Level4 (lava) :
• conversation
-If you touch the lava, you'll get more than just a burn, won't you?
- Yeah, because it's moving around really quickly.
- Just looking at it is enough to make you feel nervous
I think "moving around" is not the proper translation here. or is that an english expression I don't know?
Not sure:
• Girl : Let's just get out of here
- Even though she's the intruder here
- She's just being silly
I'm not sure as the girl is not logged and it passed too quickly. But I think I read "let's just..."
I think the conversation has more sense if she's telling the monsters to "Just get out of here" (like "please go away"), and the players answer that "
she is the intruder, not the monsters, she must be the one to go away as the monsters are at their own place".
if she is really saying "let's", maybe replace with "please". (even though I didn't hear her saying onegaishimasu, it still makes more sense), or just remove "let's".
- Will it spread from her right arm to her right left next?
- Will what spread?
- I'm talking about those weird markings
Two issues here.
1. "What will spread" seems better.
2. her "right left" shouldn't be "left arm" or "left one"?
- Do we become stronger when she gets a mark ?
- Well, going by what the stone monument says...
- The only person person who gets stronger is the girl
"person" is said twice.
not a big issue, but as you are fixing things, there no space before the "?" in english.