New sig... again

[KingdomBlade]

Huh, another try. Been a long time since I've tried again.

Comment's? Suggestions? Possible insults?

Update:

Here's a new one I made.

 

[Ner0]

Lets being with:
The borders are too thick,
Its monochromatic,
no blending,
bad text,
awful background.

I am no way discrediting your ability but, from what I know personally (though I am no expert), these are the things I have spied that are wrong with this piece.

 

[KingdomBlade]

Aww..... and I thought that the monochromatic colors were a good effect. Oh well, I'll try again.

Also, not an expert? I beg to differ.

http://gbatemp.net/t230907-ner0-s-graphics

 

[Ner0]

Monochromatic is hard to get to look right, what you need is color and flow.

 

[KingdomBlade]

A new one I just finished. So what about this one?