New sig... again

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by KingdomBlade, Jun 3, 2010.

  1. KingdomBlade
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    Huh, another try. Been a long time since I've tried again.

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    Comment's? Suggestions? Possible insults?

    Update:

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    Here's a new one I made.
     
  2. Ner0

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    Lets being with:
    The borders are too thick,
    Its monochromatic,
    no blending,
    bad text,
    awful background.

    I am no way discrediting your ability but, from what I know personally (though I am no expert), these are the things I have spied that are wrong with this piece.
     
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    Monochromatic is hard to get to look right, what you need is color and flow.
     
  5. KingdomBlade
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    A new one I just finished. So what about this one?

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