COD 5 Signature

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by Ltkort, Jan 25, 2009.

  1. Ltkort
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    Ltkort Advanced Member

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    See Title, and please rate out of ten!

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  2. rhyguy

    rhyguy GBAtemp Maniac

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    2/10
     
  3. Ltkort
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    Ltkort Advanced Member

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    PS It is my first
     
  4. cupajoe

    cupajoe Have a cup of joe!

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    3/10. Since it's your first.
     
  5. Ducky

    Ducky QUACKJECTION!

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    you guys are evil.. he did a great cut work.. 5.
     
  6. Veristical Blaze

    Veristical Blaze GBAtemp Fan

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    6/10 fo a first timer it's nice thats why i give this rating for a guy like Noitora this would be 0.000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001/10
     
  7. p1ngpong

    p1ngpong Unamused frog

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    I think it would look a bit better if the gun and hands were on top of the smoke and stuff. Now it kind of looks like the guy is buried, also maybe if the gun and hands were darkened a bit they wouldnt stand out so much and look separate from the rest.

    As a first attempt though, its pretty clean, I would give it a 5/10 for effort.
     
  8. Orangegamer

    Orangegamer GBAtemp Fan

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    B.....you don't wanna know
    its alright
    i would give it a 5/10
    cause ur a first timer
    but i can't really say anything
    because my sig is SH*T
    lol
    and that was my first one too
     
  9. iPikachu

    iPikachu C3's personal flamebot and fail artist

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    "advice":
    -use a more.. suitable text...font...
    -link doesnt fit with the background...
    -either change link,(put toon link) or change the background(i think there are some 3d brushes.?)
    -your background looks like those comic backgrounds [​IMG]
     
  10. Raestloz

    Raestloz GBATemp's Lone Wolf

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    Hmm...

    well, 1st thigs 1st: everything in the image is clean, 10 points for that

    However: The composition is... let's say -8
    Why?
    a) the hand and the gun: downright out of place, -4
    b) the smoke: looks much like a pile of dirt: which makes it even worse for the hand and the gun, -2
    c) too empty, of all things -2

    sorry, but that's my score for ya
     
  11. phoenixtaku

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    1.5/10
    I gave the .5 because I'm nice [​IMG]