The design is nice, but the copy needs some work. Check spelling, grammar etc.
I'll leave this here as a "look at what I did" kind of thread, rather than a "buy my stuff" kind of thread, though other staff members may disagree and remove this thread anyway.
@K3Nv2 I got some cheapies at wallys, that are pretty good, already have lost a few expensive ones (one falls out and gone, can't find) while cutting grass so bought some cheap ones, and of course never lose these cheap ones. (Cheap meaning only $35, compared to air buds which I only have 1 of 2 now)