First original song

Discussion in 'GBAtemp Art Studio' started by andy249901, Mar 24, 2012.

Mar 24, 2012

First original song by andy249901 at 6:16 AM (401 Views / 0 Likes) 2 replies

  1. andy249901
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    So I wrote my very first song the other day and decided to record it.
    http://m.soundcloud.com/andrewjayyang/stay-awhile-original
    I am on iPod touch so I can't put the link tag in, but still

    I know the guitar is very repetitive, but it's hard to come across a good chord progression that doesn't sound like something I've heard before

    My friend said that the guitar is too loud? And the ending needed a bit of work.
    The part where I am "yeahing" and stuff.
    The only thing that I might say about the ending was that maybe my voice was shaky, but that's what I was kind of going for.

    I dunno, but this is my first song so just know I'm not a pro or anything yet
    This was more like an experiment for me and I want to get some opinions that aren't people I really know
    Thanks
     
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    I have taught myself guitar, and I don't really know anything about scales, so thank you.
     

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