GBAtemp.net - The Independent Video Game Community

Alexander1970
Alexander1970
Very nice Review,awful Game...great Job,ma Lady.❤^_^
MajinCubyan
MajinCubyan
Good job! Hope my gf waited to pick that up. Oof.
AmandaRose
AmandaRose
Thank you Alex and MajinCubyan for the kind words.
S
SG854
Links or Review 2 did not happen
S
SG854
Some Feedback/Constructive criticism. I felt the first paragraph was too wordy. It's a review not a narration.

Could've cut down alot of that fat to get a nice thin slice. A slice made of cat. Cuz we all know cats belong in our stomach, not as pets. Dogs are the real man's best friend.
S
SG854
JK I love cats but not the musical cats.
AmandaRose
AmandaRose
The first paragraph was vastly different up to a few hours before the review was posted. I was asked by a staff member (not going to meantion it was relauby lol) to rewrite it which I did and he said it was perfect. So I don't know lol. But I will take on board your comment should I get to do another review for the site.
S
SG854
I guess it adds human character to it. A shared experience. But i'm more of a get straight to the point kind of guy with little patience. Just gimme straight information. I guess different people value different things in a review.
AmandaRose
AmandaRose
SG854 like I said I'm new to this whole review lark. So all advice is greatly appreciated. All I hope for is the review turned out better than my first one. Now that was really awful lol.
S
SG854
Links to 1st review or it might've happend but maybe not.