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Holy shit, wasn't expecting that. Nice.

A suggestion, though; maybe you could find a way to separate panels more cleanly. The black bars are a bit distracting. Maybe you could frame each panel in it's own box, or go non-orthodox and use odd shapes as frames a la Calvin and Hobbes (which I can definitely see fitting your style and the medium as a webcomic).
 
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Oh, by the way, here's the version with the original resolution I drew it in. I didn't know about the size limit yet when I did.

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Yeah, again, I'd play around with a four panel Calvin and Hobbes / Loss(tm) format, depending on if you want to go square or retangular
 
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