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<blockquote data-quote="Recorderdude" data-source="post: 3661943" data-attributes="member: 256132"><p>This is certainly a good start, DY, but as a long-time poet and lyricist, I have a few things to talk about.</p><p></p><p>The first thing is that I can't tell whether this poem was supposed to rhyme or not and what scheme it was trying to follow. I can essentially see this pattern:</p><p></p><p>ABA</p><p></p><p>CDC</p><p></p><p>EF</p><p></p><p>GHIGJKH</p><p></p><p>EHL</p><p></p><p>now, because there was a LITTLE bit of rhyming present here, but no noticeable recurring rhyme scheme, I am not sure if this was more intended to be a rhyming type of poem or free verse.</p><p></p><p>One other Issue I have with this poem (and this is assuming that it is supposed to rhyme) is that you often rhyme words with themselves or other words with the same suffix (E.G. Imagination; Imagination, Pink ball; Basketball) and this simply does not work in rhyming poems.</p><p></p><p>Other than that, I find it a fairly interesting description of kirby, what he is and what he does. Good start.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Recorderdude, post: 3661943, member: 256132"] This is certainly a good start, DY, but as a long-time poet and lyricist, I have a few things to talk about. The first thing is that I can't tell whether this poem was supposed to rhyme or not and what scheme it was trying to follow. I can essentially see this pattern: ABA CDC EF GHIGJKH EHL now, because there was a LITTLE bit of rhyming present here, but no noticeable recurring rhyme scheme, I am not sure if this was more intended to be a rhyming type of poem or free verse. One other Issue I have with this poem (and this is assuming that it is supposed to rhyme) is that you often rhyme words with themselves or other words with the same suffix (E.G. Imagination; Imagination, Pink ball; Basketball) and this simply does not work in rhyming poems. Other than that, I find it a fairly interesting description of kirby, what he is and what he does. Good start. [/QUOTE]
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