Well last month I started writing a Fanfiction, and right now it's up to chapter 4, but I've stopped updating for a month already because I was Sooo busy for the whole month,
today, after Various File-Hosting sites got shutdown lately, I suddenly felt like writing something so I decided to actually log in for the first time in 32 days and I just realized that I got a new review( At first I was like OH YEAH!) and it says this
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Having read all four chapters of this story, I would like to say that I probably shouldn't have read any further than the premise.[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]I don't like the premise of this story. I don't like that you felt the need to base this entirely on Yuuno turning into a girl, when you might have been able to create a story just as good, or better, without doing so.[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]It also seems as though you don't have a grasp of any of the characters actual personalities, but are just throwing into it what you want, where you want, no matter how the characters actually interact.[/font]
[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"](My heart just broke) It was very hard for me to accept that. I know i should just take this into consideration and improve the style of my writing, but this put me down to no mood at all...[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]So for now, i'm gonna do more research (And hopefully get more better reviews) and do a better job writting, [/font]
[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"]Well i think that's it, so yeah My first blog about me ranting shit up...[/font]
today, after Various File-Hosting sites got shutdown lately, I suddenly felt like writing something so I decided to actually log in for the first time in 32 days and I just realized that I got a new review( At first I was like OH YEAH!) and it says this
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Having read all four chapters of this story, I would like to say that I probably shouldn't have read any further than the premise.[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]I don't like the premise of this story. I don't like that you felt the need to base this entirely on Yuuno turning into a girl, when you might have been able to create a story just as good, or better, without doing so.[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]It also seems as though you don't have a grasp of any of the characters actual personalities, but are just throwing into it what you want, where you want, no matter how the characters actually interact.[/font]
[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"](My heart just broke) It was very hard for me to accept that. I know i should just take this into consideration and improve the style of my writing, but this put me down to no mood at all...[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]So for now, i'm gonna do more research (And hopefully get more better reviews) and do a better job writting, [/font]
[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"]Well i think that's it, so yeah My first blog about me ranting shit up...[/font]