Story time!

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Felt like writing a small story...
It might not make any sense but pls dont critize it too hard?

Once, when dark times were present and whole world has been seperated in two pieces, the hero was born to withstand the darkness and bring holy light to Earth. The power he was wielding, the spells he could cast, made everyone sure that he IS the one.
At first, hero wasn't really believing in himself. He couldn't cast any magic spell or do any sword tricks. He was like every other human on Earth, before he meet Dark Necromancer named "Narumi".
She at first, tried to cast a curse on him but failed, she also tried to slash him up but to no avail. That's because, Hero is welding an ability called "Angel's Protection" which blocks every hit in cost of losing stamina with each blow.
Exhausted Hero, falled down. He couldn't stand anymore... Necromancer used it to his advantage and ran to deal a final blow. Hero pulled his Sword and blocked her attack, then he dealt a blow to her back which broke her armor, revealing her neutral clothes, and also her gorgeous body. Embarrased Narumi admitted defeat.

That's how Narumi became Hero's servant. She could heal in cost of feeling pain and manipulate shadows to help her in battle. She also could spawn or bribe various monsters to listen to her.
Narumi and Hero created a deathly combo but however one person didn't like it.

And what do you guys think about it? I'm good/bad at writing stuff? Should I continue this?
See ya in next blog post!
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Why?

Even if it goes no where it would still be a fun thing to write. I wrote a story a few years ago and I've been meaning to make a part 2.
 
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I'm bored mostly so I write random stories since i was 10.
I don't know why but i'm enjoying it.
 
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Small is right. :P

Okay joke over now, to serious business, this is a made up story right? I honestly thought it was gonna be real story from your past when i saw the title.
 
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Nah, it's made up.
I love fantasy theme so I mostly do that but I recently stopped it since I was judged for it in school ;o;
I mean, I can write a real-life story about a friend which I will probably never meet anymore...
 
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No, it's not.
I write fanficts when someone asks me though.
 
"in cost of feeling pain" Yussssss, I love ideas like that. Being able to control one's inner pain and making it into something more is just :ok_hand: imo
 

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