I just read Another World's review of GCW Zero and it was posted 2 days after MINE, which makes me extremely suspicious because the content seems like mine only worded differently. Don't know if this is true.
are you fucking high? don't you ever accuse me of plagiarism. i worked with gcw's ceo for over 2 years to secure my review sample. i'm a respected member of this community and a respected reviewer. i don't appreciate your slander or your PMs accusing me of such.
as for feedback:
"A special edition GCW Zero box (Not my picture)" -- that is the KS box. same as the unit I was sent. it contains the same contents as the thinkgeek box.
the black font is very difficult to read on the dark theme. the centered TOC is hard to read, left justification would look much more professional. images should be be the same size, shape, and format all the way through the review, otherwise it just looks unprofessional.
i personally wouldn't make so many comparisons to the a320. the zero is not made by dingoo technologies. it is only a spiritual successor. the point of the zero was to make the handheld that the dingoo community wished the a320/a330 had been. comparing it is like apples to oranges. sure they both play games and run a form of dingux, but beyond that they are completely different machines by completely different manufacturers. by continually comparing it to the a320 you are setting yourself up for criticism and arguments.
this mixed justifications (center/left) make the review difficult to follow. you may wish to adjust this or rethink the layout in order to make it flow better.
the FrankenZero was the term devs gave to the prototype units made before the SE units. calling the production unit that in your review is going to confuse users.
FrankenZeros - This is a difficult subject because we expected all of the first 40 preorders to get a 256mb unit but we might not be able to do that now. Qbert was flashing and testing most of the batch of 40 and reported to us that some were defective. Remember, this was the first batch the factory made and part of their charm is that the QC was a little off. That leaves us with less than 40 units to give. I don't know the exact number and we'll have to check and see how many are available now.
Some of the first SE units had 256 MB instead of the expected 512MB, but have the internal memory size right (twice as much as the non-SE units), so a user from here called those units "FrankenZeros"... part SE and part non-SE.
"When you pull out the styrofoam" -- i haven't seen a production unit with styrofoam. the zero is encased in a cardboard tray that sits above the cables and extras. if your unit does indeed have styrofoam then leave that sentence in there, but be sure to include images. if it is actually cardboard then please change it. when future readers find your review in 6 months they may jump to conclusions and assume something "fake" or "clone" about their system because their unit shipped in a cardboard tray and not styrofoam.
"If you backed the Zero on kickstarter before it was released, you get a special edition" -- the SE units were made prior to KS. they were a limited run and did have a few issues. most did not see the light of day and few actually go their hands on them. so if you backed the unit on KS you got a KS unit. the units that followed were the retail units from thinkgeek with the new wifi chip.
"It feels similar to the Nintendo DS lite or DSi, but a little better." -- this statement makes it seem like you have never used a ds/dsi. i would never compare them to the zero. i own a few chinese/clone/fake/open source handhelds and the only dpad i find on par with the zero is the gemei a330.
it would be respectable to thank surkow and the quick start guide for all the info you copy/pasted.
-another world