I've done plenty a tutorial in my day, and all of mine were at least up to par (unlike this sorry excuse for a tutorial).
Personally I think it was just a quick attempt to make a tutorial so as to win a couple of steam bucks. IMO you should salvage what you can (which is very little) and...
To begin with, the formatting is awful - I can't stand the layout; it's messy and unreadable.
Also, the information is commonly known and not very informative or descriptive. I haven't played the game more than two hours collectively and I already knew most of the info contained in your...
I took a look at the rail and noticed that the two last pins were soldered for some reason, luckly I still had the rail of my broken joycon so after I swapped them I was able to use it attached to the console