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Chary

Getting better! There's a few too many runons, and a lot of your sentences start with The. But there's definite improvement here

Made some edits. o_o

Do I need more edits? o_o

Chary

It's better but atm we're rolling with staff-created news only, as we're awaiting google news accredation

I didn't know google controls us. O_O

Chary

google controls eeeeveryone!

But I don't want to be control by a search engine, they might spy on me and leak more news than games did before E3. >_>