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On HK’s PSN rather than in. PlayStation should always be written like that, rather than Playstation. Gameboy Advance is Game Boy Advance. Anytime in this case is any time. Steam is a company/storefront so it should be capital. Image looks awkward on mobile? Perhaps the trailer would be better to link than an image? You’ve got the makings of a good post there, there’s just a handful of issues.

I see, thanks for the advice. I'll fix and make sure to be consistent.

I can't change the title, so I don't know how I'm gonna fix "PlayStation" in the thread title.

Wrong case of “there” in the first sentence too

Collection is part of the title so it needs to be capital.

PlayStation store also needs a capital

Yeah, I fixed it. Have to remember to write the titles with capitals and the same way the company brands their stuff. Is kind hard to remember and awkward to write sometimes. Also the thread title can't be edited, so I can't fix the grammar.

These are just important to remember for next time. It can be difficult to remember all the minor details and stylizations, but once you get into the habit of following press releases and making more news posts, it comes naturally

It was a good attempt, honestly. Just remember that all proper nouns are capital, and that if you're writing a console name, google it just to make sure it's stylized correctly. not many people really know the difference between gameboy and game boy, so its a very easy error to make.